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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
At long last, Joseph introduced them to David, who shook hands all over again. Then, they hurried to the sitting room. The whole family was quickly introduced, and the hugging and handshaking began all over again. At last, Joseph reached out and took Amelia’s hand, leading her up to his family.
Everyone met everyone, y…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Unfortunately, not all of us have that luxury.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@theducktator oh that’s so cute with the ducks having to take a journey to get to the others. I love it.
@ellette-giselle I never liked dolls growing up and didn’t have any, but I did have TONS of stuffed animals and when I was 8 or 9, I often acted out elaborate stories with them at night when I was supposed to be sleeping.
Re-enacting Narnia…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
TBH, Whaley, Ellette and Koshka are all basically saying riffs on the same thing from what I can tell. It’s ok to have a girl fighting if she needs to (or if she thinks she needs to, which could be an important character arc), but don’t make her into what’s basically a guy with long hair and wide hips. (I mean, like the judge Deborah in…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Here’s 1,255 of the 1750 words I need to write. (still have some more to go🫠)
the first thing is all from 1 scene, but each separated section is random snippets of it bc I’m not being an organized writer today XD it’s Leon/Riker’s 3rd novel
the second part is a couple of scenes from Erich/Esther’s novel✨
“He’s not the fat…
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Also, if you are wondering about my feedback for CR, don’t worry! I’m getting there. I have to beta-read something for another person first. Then I’ll get to yours.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
It was something i made with canva. lol.
basically, you all snowballed me, so then I snowball machine-gunned you.
Oh. But…it has a good ending?
Okay, shall I send it before I finish or after? It’s a school paper, not a story, btw. (I wasn’t sure if you knew that.)
Nope. I didn’t know that. But, it only makes me more curious to…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I could send it to you if you want, but I’m not quiet done with it. I have until the end of the week to finish.
Yes, please!
It is a very sad beginning. 😥
But then it gets happy!!!!! 😈
Uh…what does that even mean??? What is that video???!!! I seriously don’t understand it. Sorry.
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Except I don’t even know what to write 😂😂😂
I think Leon and Riker are on vacation enjoying a fireplace and some hot cocoa right now and I think I’m just gonna let them enjoy that for now XXXD
@koshka can I join you??? I feel attacked😂
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh dear. I think I’m going to go hide in the log cabin.
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @loopylin @theshadow @koshka @whalekeeper @whoever else was talking about this, I don’t know
I’m a little bit late to the party (a couple months late, but whatever), but I’ve got a question relating to the topic of women going into battle.
Sort of.
In my WIP, my female main character begins doing uncontroversial fine-for-girls…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Wait a minute…did you just write all 20 of your snowballs right NOW???!!!!
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Woah, controversial? Um…is it possible for me to read it? I mean, you don’t have to post it here. If you don’t want to, that’s totally fine as well.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Seriously???
5 balls????
*gasp*
20!!!!!!
You’re insane!!!
OH MY GOSH. I feel terrible for you! At least you write fast.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Yep 🙂
Ooh, a recipe. Will have to try this.
I watched the video, it was good. Definitely adds some clarity to the whole thought process.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Hmmmmm.
Ok. I’m seeing a child soldier type. He’s got a past and he doesn’t care what he does because he doesn’t want to care. Yet he also feels he still has something to accomplish. He could be redeemable, or he could be an incredible thorn in the MC’s side. As for who he is… I don’t know. I think he was once connected to…[Read more]
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