Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Haven’t seen it, and didn’t have any plans yet. When my brother saw the trailer, he reported the protagonist was a Mary Sue, which turned our family off. But now you’ve peeked my curiosity. I didn’t realize Peter Jackson was directing it.

@stephie

Eek I ranted sorry.

No worries. I rant all the time, just ask @ellette-giselle.

Thank you both for your feedback on the emotional scene. Heh heh. Maybe one day I will learn how to make my characters emotional, but your advice will help me, thanks for it. Where would the both of you say the emotion fell off in the chapter? Was it around…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’ve never seen it but it looks so cool and that song is beautiful! I’ll have to look into it some more. 🤍

@ellette-giselle

lol 😂🤣

@ellette-giselle

I have a question: is your picture profile from The Winter King? And your banner picture?

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Next chapter.

Chapter the 33rd – The Father

I’ll see you after Christmas with the final chapter! Merry Christmas to you all!

@theducktator @ellette-giselle @anyone else

Sure! I can share the prompt soon, but have no set deadline until the next year. Give me a bit of time to think about the prompt.

@elishavet-pidyon

Has black curls(cropped short so it’s just very tumbly hair), black/brown eyes, and a lighter olive complexion. Is about average height for a 16 year old and on the thin side.

Ah… handsome boy. Whaley likey. 😏

@ellette-giselle

…So you’re interested in making it to the school to make dance arrangements? I was under the i…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr

Thank you so much! ❤️

@koshka @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Thanks!! 💛

@ellette-giselle

Oh. *so sad*

I love the really bad characters who are villains but then are redeemed and turned around. In fact…nearly all of my favorite characters from books/movies followed that arc. Like Edmund Pevensie, Boromir, Rolf Klaus, Richard Maxwell… etc

But, you need the negative character arcs as well because that’s true in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That sounds good!

@power  @ellette-giselle  @linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin [Read more]

@power

Thanks! The story is actually my sister’s story, but I wrote it. It was a neat project to do with her! Thanks for judging…even though there wasn’t much to judge.

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I know. It’s busy this time of year.

@linus-smallprint

No, I’m concentrating on finishing my main WIP right now. Maybe in the new year I will p…

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@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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@ellette-giselle

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get to become Christians before something bad happens. You know.

Yes. It’s not always God’s will to save everyone we want to be saved, and I’m kind of glad you included it because of that. Your story could become d…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hard to be friendly when you have sharp teeth.

*Sends meme to my sister (not the one who wrote A Parched Land)*

@ellette-giselle

Was Liam’s original name Ezra? I caught a second sentence other than the one hybrid mentioned where you called him that instead:

Sabina kept on doing it, and Ezra relaxed. Sabina pressed gentle fingers against his wrist and then looked up at Joseph. “He’s slipping,” she said softly.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Chris…[Read more]

@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else

I signed up!!