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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Just wondering. Do you have a cover for this book yet?
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
And now…I will proceed to hit four people…
@ellette-giselle @power @rae @esther-c
Write or die!!!!
@ellette-giselle Sorry…please check the post above…sometimes when I post names it still doesn’t tag them.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore Here is the next installment of Dale’s story…
…and everyone else who shows up in this part in some little way…@ellette-giselle @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @hybridlore @raxforge @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c @power @loopylin @rae @the_lost-journal
I’m serious. Everyone shows up in this story at least once. *grin* read…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Finally getting to this!
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I think they all were pretty good.
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
Uhhh…..If there were any, I don’t remember. (I have…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@linus-smallprint @rae @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @hybridlore and whoever
I have a new project I’m excited to work on this week. Just spent an hour plotting the first half of it, but I’m still ironing out the wrinkles before drafting it. Some of that has to do with genre.
I think it’s going to have a lot of contemporary elements.…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
There are definitely some people even in Christian circles who use dating unwisely. I remember this one gal in my homeschool group who had an obsession with Twilight at 14. Yuckyyy, and unrealistic.
My parents allow me to date for several reasons. They believe it is wise to develop an intuition with guys before choosing one guy…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Finished it!
I’ll get to answering your feedback questions later. I may take a month to reread the story again first. (*Goes and steals all sections of the book so I can read them offline*).
But for now, here is some initial feedback on the last bit:
I think the climax and the build-up to it were well done. As cliche as rescue…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Okay cool! I’m glad that works well for you and your church community. I bet it also works well for you because you’ve known the people in your church for a long time, so there’s a lot of familiarity. A sense of home.
Your picture of dating definitely isn’t the same as what we actually do in other Christian circles, though.…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I don’t think it’s happening any more. Occasionally it does to me though. Could be a problem on my side.
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hybridlore replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Also a detective!! 🕵️
Mwahhahah… prepare to be beaten!! 🤪
So, if you go to your profile I think it says. Otherwise, look at My Spaces? It was confusing for me too.
@everyone
KP is threatening to shut down… my link in my email didn’t work, so I’m a little concerned we’re gonna get locke…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Is everything with your CWW account okay, @ellette-giselle , by the way?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ha, now I remember. I want a banshee, that would be cool.
Well, this is slightly tricky because I don’t date and don’t believe in dating at all. BUT, that is a side point. You’re characters are dating, so lets see. My standards on this are higher then most, so I won’t give you exactly what I would do, but a general…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle all righty!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle I do, I just keep procrastinating cause that’s me. lol.
Remind me what page they’re on, and I’ll do it when I don’t have animation work to do. Which might be around 2 today when my brother has tutoring. But I don’t know.
Either way, I’ll do it today!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle aww thanks!
yeah I like their expressions in this one, they came out really nice.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
The sandwiches. I haven’t invented any fantasy food besides laka, which is some sort of fish.
Probably one of each.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
1: love triangles. I find them incredibly unrealistic and often ridiculous.
😭
jk jk. XD I personally don’t mind them if they’re done right. 😉
2: no communication. The entire plot should not be able to be resolved with a 5 minute conversation. Like seriously. This may be a problem in real life, but do I want to real a full 300+ pages abo…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Thanks for letting me know! It looks like an amazing writer’s film!
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Liberty replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I hope being signed up two times isn’t a problem.
I’ve done that before for other things. It shouldn’t be a problem.
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