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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 4 months ago
@raxforge (I changed a few things in the story btw) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore @theducktator
Story 10!
Only two more stories and then The Baron Chronicles will come to a close. Thx for reading this far! 💜
Fire
The blaze in the fireplace crackled. Baron balanced a pencil on his hand, staring down at his rose drawing on…[Read more] -
whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
Oooh, I love Puss in Boots, especially the Last Wish. That movie was as good as the second Spiderverse, imo.
(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮
I think of Samurai X and Faith from Ninjago. They did it twice, several seasons apart.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
In the second book everyone knew rescue was coming, and it was a race against time. All hope seems lost, but in the last moment rescue comes and that’s when you find out that the villains had already lost the war and were under order to release prisoners but were trying to off the MC at the last moment.
Oh, did you have a s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Uh, big brother mode just got activated.
Leo
Rory looked… lonely. Leo reached over and ruffled the kid’s hair, not stopping to think that he was probably too old for that. He needed a childhood. “Welp, now you’re stuck with me too, so I guess you’ll see how blessed Quincy is.”
He laughed and scooped up a handful of metal…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Leo
Leo chuckled and shook his head. “Do we look related? But I’m the one who pulled the little monkey from a shelled out hole, so I guess I have as much right to claim him as anyone else.”
He leaned back against the couch.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh goodness yes. XD
Leo
Soldier. Yes…and no. Another sigh caught in his throat.
“Yes, but no. I don’t really know what I’m doing here.” He leaned back against the couch. The floor felt cold through his work pants.
“I was apprenticed to Admiral S. Faltack at twelve years old as a novice engineer. Silvia’s always been smart,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 hehe I’m glad you’re excited🤭 @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @theducktator @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else-idk-lol-?
Soooo I just wanted to say that me having this fantasy idea doesn’t really change anything about the Broken and Redeemed Trilogy. Though I love this new idea, Leon/Riker…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @ducktater
That’s true! Like in Mossflower, where the one mousethief just escapes. Hilarious yes, but dreadfully convenient. One can still save One’s character, but it needs to fit the rules.
Of course, to mix stuff up you can always make a master prison that has a weakness that both the good guys and the bad guys exploit. L…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I am the person who is furious at the end of a book when my favorite character doesn’t die!! Why? Because the author cheated to save him! The mastermind villain makes a “mistake”. The unbreakable jail cell has a weakness no one who has been trying to break out for the last hundred years has discovered yet our hero just “stum…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Leo
“All sorts of things. Mostly worked on ships. Built one out of scrap material with Silvia. Took us three years. The other stuff.” He sighed. Looked over at the kid. Well, most people probably wouldn’t call him a kid. “I worked with energy deployment and shielding. I was one of the best.”
It wasn’t a boast, but it also…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Don’t worry, Rory is well loved.
That is precisely when worry is needed. The worst things happen to the best loved characters.
I can’t break the rules of the story just because I love a character. I hate it when authors do that.
Same. KotLC used to be one of my favorite series, but there have been 9 books, the stakes are sup…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Poor kid.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character commissions!! in the forum Art 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m sorry, I finished drawing Rory a couple days ago but I realized I never took a photo and posted it!
Here he is (I think something’s off about his face 🤔 but I hope it looks like him)

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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@everybody I’m starting to be a little scared of retaliation…
What have I done? XDOh, good xD
Yay!
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HighScribe replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @anyone
I don’t know if I’ll have anything going on that day (probably not, though) but if I’m free I’ll come!
Ellette, I think I gave you my email, right?
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
You’re coming home? Yay! I’m so glad you all survived!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I’ll probably start writing on a computer once I get my own, but I like paper because it’s so portable.
I just KNOW that when I get my license, I’m going to be the family errand girl, and I figure I should have a way to contact my parents from the store.
Or call 911 if I get kidnapped. XDWe have a house phone too, but my…[Read more] -
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle I’m loving all the wholesome Leo and Rory moments 🩷
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