Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

you just love sailor characters. 😝

Yup. I’m not ashamed of it either!! Hmmm…well, being a sailor is a good reason for me to like him, but I really liked him because he was a well-mannered sailor. Many aren’t. I immediately liked him because he was truly trying to help Julian and his friends.

Pfft!! What!! A unicorn! That’s i…

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@ellette-giselle

he blasted everyone with fire.

That was fun, lol

@savannah_grace2009

Alpha killed one of @ellette-giselle ‘s Agents.

@ellette-giselle
I read your latest section, but don’t have time to comment on it today. All I can say is that I liked it (in the same sort of way I have liked your other sections recently) That may be the case until Thursday. Don’t worry about me, you can keep posting more stuff.

@ellette-giselle I’m honestly glad you didn’t kill them straight off. Slavery is a cruel fate for them, but this is really interesting–and different from the other books. I also like the “change in scenery” and would love a map of the new countries on this side of the sea.

I like the new characters, too.

@ellette-giselle @raxforge

He’s used to fighting people who are still alive. XD

@ellette-giselle

I knoww. It does seem to work with his backstory, though. Poor guy. Ten years in slavery…

@ellette-giselle

I like him! He has a funny personality. I think he might become a Christian eventually.

@ellette-giselle

Great section!! It seemed pretty realistic. Oof, Ian’s going to be trouble 😬

I can’t wait for the next one!

@ellette-giselle

He’s gonna die.

Yeah… it’s kinda hard to kill what’s already dead. And even if you try, the dead don’t like it very much.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Thank you!

@ellette-giselle okay then!!

@ellette-giselle yikes! that’s messed up. Although I’m glad the rest of your team realized it was wrong.

Don’t graduate our MEDICAL STUDENTS with horrible grades. That’s just unwise.

actually saw a thing about that, where a girl and her parents actually sued the school she went to for graduating her with a high score when she can barely rea…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.

@theshadow

Okay, great! 😊

@ellette-giselle I agree with @hybridlore ‘s statements! I think that bit about Leon’s reaction might’ve been what I felt was missing from the scene.

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.

I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yup. Julian got hit hard….

Also, I have a character named Julian as well! He was once a haughty prince…until he got turned into a unicorn. My story was a twist of the “Frog Prince”.

@ellette-giselle

“For You, God, tested us; You refined us like silver.”

I read that verse today!

 The next day, Roland was ready to go on, but there was no sign of Rolf and Leon.

Wow. He’s healing fast. I had a sprain before and it took 2 whole weeks to heal!

Oooh! I love Dian!

“Dian! Kom hier. Ek het jou hulp nodig.”

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@ellette-giselle If it works better for your story to chuck it, then do that, but save the concept for later cause I found it really interesting, and I’m sure others would too.