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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle oooh new main characters!!!
Are they related? or no?
Looks like they’re defectors from the army!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey! Are you still planning to put the second book out soon?
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Liberty replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
You don’t have to be the youngest to have YSS. 😉
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Yeah that makes sense with your photographic memory.
My memory sucks. Wanna trade?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
They look great!! Jason’s is so funny. I like the “better idiots” quote and the one about hiding the parts. 😂😂
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Liberty replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I don’t remember these fellows well because I skimmed over their part so much…but from just looking at their moodboards, I instantly liked Brian! I love his quotes. And maybe because he sort of looks like an AOA actor? Jason is funny as well…
And…Evan is showing some clear signs of YSS.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Ron, yeah, but I like Jason a lot too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle so many funny quotes lollllll
Jason’s one repeatedly misspelling “engineer” made me laugh
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle lol idk why I did that
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yes, do it
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
You’re welcome!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Alrighty!
Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle awww man no Ron and Jason? (Jason was the engineer right? The one who kept wanting to dismantle the plane?)
actually speaking of plane do you have an Evan one, too? Might make @theducktator happy.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I found Jim’s. I also have seen Jonathan, 314, and two people I have yet to meet: Amber and Michael.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?
And Jim too?

…but also interesting and likeable in their odd sort of way. I think I like Jim better of the two, he seems slightly less stoobid. I’m afraid he is going to disappear into the background, because you didn’t make a moodboard for him on page one of this forum. Though I…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I have made it up to the end of Chapter 21. Sorry for the lack of comments. I’ve been quite busy with a lot of work. Currently working two part-time jobs and have to cover for my coworkers while they are on vacation. I have time to read at work, but I am offline and don’t have much data, so I don’t really want to use it up for…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks! We’re thinking of getting it printed, although we’re not certain about publishing. LotR has a vicious copyright gang.
Hehe. It’s been fun. I don’t know how clear this is, but it’s a satire on multiple aspects from authors to tendencies in fantasy tropes. The fanfic side is part of that, so we’re definitely twisting the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon That was really good!
The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.
Funny enough I always kinda assumed it was a LOTR fanfic that turned into its own thing, because the names o…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterestedinRangers @loopylin (This is Onnendel’s WIP)
NOW AT LAST.
*dramatic drumroll*
Another installment!
In Which Tables Turn and Aenwest Delivers a Rant on Vigilance
Chapter 9
Dinner was full of ranger talk as everyone had a question for Travenor. Dwogin and I were…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
I just finished it…I didn’t comment much, but still, there are some. OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! 314 was my favorite character from the first moment he appeared…but I won’t know 100% for sure until I have the actual book and take the time to fully, slowly read it.
This book reminds me so much of another story a young writer wants…[Read more]
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