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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
“And these are my children. The youngest is Beth, and following are Elise, Andrew, Quinlan, Ruth, Amelia, Stephen and David.” – Book II
Aaron glanced up at him. “Hello Andrew, how are you doing?” he asked, motioning to the ground beside him.
Andrew sat down. He was a few years younger then Aaron, but he was just as tall. He…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
You can borrow them back to post as long as you don’t kill them.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
HEY. There’s not enough room, okay? I like that quote.
Is that really a thing? Anyway, it’s too late. They’re mine now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Nope. Not happening. *puts all of your characters on the protection squad*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, the special attention, and her age. 🤪
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Ohhhh, gotcha.
I don’t know. The way you described her. I think I’m just used to picking out love interests immediately.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Lolol. How did Linus know about Amelia already? And you weren’t very subtle. XD
True, but they would have gotten married.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I feel like Joseph and Amelia are going to get married . . . 🤭
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Ah, ok that makes sense.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I expanded what I had to 202 words, but it’s still really flash fiction. Let me see if I can get my other idea in order.
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
So this line is like the third rail?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Lol, good luck. Are you judging them by the end of today or tomorrow?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Now if only Joseph remembers this……
I guess we will find out.
Yeah. That’s because it’s so much easier to write about people closer to your own age.
I know. And even when there are characters who are older, it is much easier to leave them at home when all the young people go out on an adventure. I’m trying to work on an older c…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
March 12th
A nice peek into Aaron’s past.
Goodbye to Eric, Asher, Sabina, Darian and Alicia. Until next time.
“Stop right there,” the other guard barked. He looked over his shoulder and then drew near. “Hand over the bag so we can search it.”
Joseph nearly froze. Just beneath the cloak at the top of his bag was his Bible,…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Here’s my story, sorry if it isn’t great, I kind of rushed it lol.
The Final Minutes of a Dying Man
Eyes closed, he began to think.
And now, to death I go. The pain had subsided now, he couldn’t feel it much.
And as for life, what I have i to say? I laughed, cried, feared, failed, conquered, and loved. I saw many things, such…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle wow!
also don’t worry about your signature being messy. That’s just how signatures are.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Yw!
It looks a little ‘messy’ in the way most signatures do, but it’s not ‘sloppy’ and it’s nice and even.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I just gave you access. However, I’m going to paste my whole story here. I will be pretty busy today cooking for Thanksgiving, so I won’t be able to give everyone access that quickly. So, I’ll post it here where it’s easy to read!
Life from Death“Truly, truly, I say to you, the one who hears My word, and b…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks!
Oh wow, that looks really nice! I love the wreath of branches.
(your signature [on the drawing, not your forum signature] looks very pretty and neat, btw. I wish I could do mine that nice :p)
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Happy thanksgiving to you too!!!!
I posted in the chat chat this morning, but I doubt anyone saw it. lol.
No, I didn’t* lol.
lol I saw it, but I didn’t get the chance to reply.
Happy Thanksgiving!! 🦃🍽️🥧✌️
Happy Thanksgiving to you too!!
I know I’m late, but Happy Thanksgiving!