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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@jonas Cool ok @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @raxforge @hybridlore @rae @grcr
Felicity
As Felicity listened to the stranger, some odd movement in the corner of her eye caught her attention.
A couple feet away from her stood a brick chimney. Drawn in dark ink on its wall, a two-dimensional cartoon rabbit was waving at her. He wore a pair of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*sobbing because I feel overwhelmed.*
Sorry…
Okay. I get it. You’re right.
Again.
Hey, you make it sound like I’m a know-it-all author and am rarely wrong. That is not the case. You have corrected me a few times. And you should see the amount of changes between my first and second drafts because of all the things that were n…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay Linus, now I’m mad.
I do what I can. *smiles smugly*
I KNEW IT! I knew he was going to try to convince Alan to go back to magic, I just didn’t know why, or that it was such a big deal!
You have me a little panicked and thoroughly intrigued.You foretold this well and set the stage in a solid and intriguing way. Well done on…
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Linus Smallprint started the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle, @highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @raxforge, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, @rae, @the_lost-journal, @savannah_grace2009Â and anyone else who cares to look.
Hello everyone!
I wanted to let you all know my sister, Elizabeth, just has self-published a book on Amazon! (She has yet to create a Kingdom…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Yay! Congratulations and a cup of cold cider! That was really good. The Black Mongoose struck again. Struck our heartstrings, that is.
I’m glad you went ahead and judged it. I meant to step out last night. My second story was not coming. Besides, these stories were all really good.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked it!!
Congratulations, your story was amazing!!! Everything was so well put together!!
Thank you, your story was really good too!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @raxforge @hybridlore @rae @grcr @loopylin
Ellis —Â Elderstrand (Group 1)
The newcomer stared in astonishment as the armored creatures sagged and went still. “That was…incredible…” he stammered, still in shock. “No wonder–”
Just then, there was a prolonged wailing blast of a horn. The man stiffened. “We have…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @raxforge @hybridlore @rae @grcr @loopylin @the_lost-journal @beth-torres @highscribeofaetherium (I think I got everyone)
Alright! Sorry for the wait, but I’m here to get us moving again.
To quickly recap, I believe that this is where things currently stand:
One group, consisting of Marcel, Leon and Julian, Ben and…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Omc really?!?! That makes me so happy <3 thank you for reading it, it means a lot to me!
I agree, the beginning HAS to be perfect!!! hahahah I’m such a perfectionist!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
All right, ladies. Time to head into the last section of chapters in this book. What do you say we spice things up a bit?
Also, I should warn you, this is the longest chapter I have ever written.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Anyone want to critique this??? I edited the prologue…AGAIN…bwahahaha
I feel too guilty to tag people (idk why…that’s just me) but I’m still going to tag some people…lol
@rae @jonas (not sure if you are still on here a lot but I’m ALIVE in case you were wonderingg!) @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (not sure if you’re still here…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Awww girl I love you so much 😭😭😭💗💗💗 you always know what to say <3
HIII GIRL!!!! My thanksgiving was good, a little sad but good!
I think I ate too much food *cries*
YES YES YESSSS!!!! I’m glad I’m back too lol
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, you tell him. (I find it so funny that our characters have similar traits and struggles. I was totally thinking of your Eric when I was editing this scene.)
This is not the last time this is going to happen. Well as they say, ‘great minds think alike.’ Or as my dad says, ‘Fools of a feather flock together’.
Okay, do I really…
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
No, not the same Andrew. (How did you remember him? I even forgot that was the other guy’s name. lol.) Should I change the name in the first book? That Andrew was an older teen, while this Andrew is like nine or ten.
When I reread your book, I remember coming across him and wondering who he was supposed to be and why you were i…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yay, Leon and Julian are back! 😁 Great section. It did kind of gloss everything and not show it personally, but that’s okay as long as your go back to more immediate-feeling scenes, if that makes sense. Joseph’s character is good. I’m glad he feels afraid and guilty for his fear. He feels human.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Happy Thanksgiving everyone! I drew the Over the Garden Wall brothers in celebration.
@loopylin @rae @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow @esther-c @keilah-h @hybridlore @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed

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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle
Hi Ellette! How are you doing!?! It’s been a while since we’ve talked <333 -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle oooh I like that picture!!
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I know it has! I’m doing well. I finished another book, am working on publishing another, and starting a new one. lol.
how about you?
ELETTE THAT’S SO COOL!!!! I’m so proud of you, that’s AMAZINGGG
I’ve been hanging in there…or trying to…
My mom was recently diagnosed with Mantle Cell Lymphoma, a very rare and aggressive type of lymph node cancer. It’s spread pretty quickly and is all over… but the treatment seems to be helping…? I think? I don’t know, there’s still a…[Read more]
Oh Sara, I’m so sorry, I’ll be praying for you and your mother. Please feel free to email or tag me if you need to talk.
Thank you, I’m really happy with the writing progress I’ve made. 🙂
Thank you Ellette!
that means a lot <3
I'm so glad!!!