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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@rae @raxforge @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Pain rung in Marcel’s skull; he felt as if something had woken him up, but he couldn’t hear anything. His ears were definitely bleeding, since his rose-colored hair had begun to clump with a darker color.
Everything was numb. Dark, wet, and…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
“When I healed you, the song tells me things about you, not a lot, but some,” Flare came up to Baron’s ear, “You don’t have to worry, I know very little about your past.”
“Wait, hold on,” Ben turned to Flare, “I thought you said i…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
Flare looked confused, “Isn’t that your name? I could’ve sworn it was. Though I guess the spell has been wrong before.” Flare looked like he was pondering.
“Why the heck would it matter if we know your name or not… uuuuuuugh, o…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@raxforge @jonas @loopylin @ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper
Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1
Brutus froze in his tracks as Flare used his true name. “Wh-what did you just c-call me?” Brutus went as blank as a sheet, almost as if he was going to pass out.
I have no preference of where exactly Jenna goes
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr
Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
“We’ll stick with you Baron,” Flare put his hand on his shoulder.
Ben raised his head from his half-sleep, “Who are we sticking with?”
“Baron.”
“Who?”
Flare pointed at Baron, a little frustrated, “This guy!”
“Oh, okay, I’ll b…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
YESSS I WANNA WATCH BONHOEFFER SO BAD😭😭😭
I know, right?
Riker Schind, an SS officer, struggles with his conscience as he uncovers the horrific truths behind the regime he serves. Haunted by his past and the role he plays in the suffering around him, Riker’s journey towards redemption is fraught with peril and soul-searching d…
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed
Here’s Josiah’s story! (my brother)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y-bt9Rkb_NvaU_7OHfRP4gJZPXbZX9Man8QPOqBdXyU/edit?usp=sharing
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
yes!! A girl after my own heart! lol. I am German, so this is really close to me.
Do you speak German?
YES!! I’m just waiting for it to come out!!!
I know!!!
oh I’d love to read it if he’d let me! Do you want to post it here, or do you want my email?
I can post it here. @freed_and_redeemed You can read it as well! I’d love to hea…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
How darest thou insult our fuzzy black personage by pelting our pelt with white cloud dust!?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Leon turned to Joseph and pressed something into his hand. “This is for you, from Sabina.”
I was kind of expecting it to take longer for a response to come in. But this isn’t a pacing issue this time. It’s fine we got one so quickly and I was happy to see it.
I took the boy’s hand and told the soldiers he was my son, and I would…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Question for you after you read the section above (do not, I repeat, do not read this before).
Spaces to help hide the contents:
I already started working on the next chapter and realized that Alan’s reaction to the events in the previous chapter…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter.
I’m trying to come up with a name for the village The Faithful find. Any suggestion?
Also, Ellette, I have included a sample of a casual conversation between guys. This can give you some ideas for some casual conversation for your male…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love that idea too!! 🥰
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FIREQUACKER started the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
In my current WIP, I have 6 MCs right now, but I want to add another one or two. In another one, I have 11, though that one may change. Is this too many? When does the amount of main characters become too many to keep track of?
@whalekeeper @rae @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @raxforge @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @ellette-giselle…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper I love that!!! <3
ACK
HEY!!!
how dare you.
ok, fine.
another bit of a scene for Book #3 (almost 200 words😜)
A door slammed open.
“You are either insanely brave or hilariously stupid, Herr Wagner. But given your insolence, I suppose I can see what information I may yet gather out of you. Fisher, return L…
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle (*hands you tissues*) @liberty
YESSS I WANNA WATCH BONHOEFFER SO BAD😭😭😭
And yes, Liberty, I have written 2 novels with Leon/Riker as the MCs. The Broken and Redeemed Trilogy is solely theirs.
Book 1 is out already and has been published since July this year, and the 2nd one will (HOPEFULLY…we’ll just have to see😅) be released…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle awww Sabina caring for the orphan clan is so cute!!!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 year, 7 months ago
This is a pretty specific question, I’ll admit. 😅 Any other history nerds? @koshka @esther-c @liberty @mineralizedwritings @otherworldlyhistorian @jonas @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @linus-smallprint @rae
Sorry for the tags if you’re not interested, guys.
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle No to both of those. I’ve heard from others that the second one isn’t as good, but idk. The movie sounds fun. I’ll check it out sometime.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed whoa, awesome characters!!!
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