Ellette Giselle

@keilah-h

honestly I think something like that actually exactly what @stephie was going for. The guy either doesn’t know any better or is something of a coward, and the girl is forced to lead because of it.

Off topic: I wonder if I’ll get an email if I tag myself. @stephie

Anyways, yes, that was what I was going for. There are a few sit…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @hybridlore

I have FINALLY caught up with all my snowballs!!!!!!!!!!

and I wrote a Lotr paper while doing it. I thought I would post it here and see what you all think. (My father gave me this assignment in preparation for a Lotr New Year’s night out my siblings and I are having with two friends.

Why do you enjoy the…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

He looked back over at Rory, a smile twitching his lips. The strain of carrying Quincy was obviously getting to him, but Leo hesitated to take back the small boy. Rory looked more like…himself with that small head tucked against his neck. More alive and real.

What had he asked?

“Ah. Not far, no.” But not…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I mean, I DID say that was the exception as opposed to the rule, so if you’re trying to counter my argument, we’re actually kinda saying the same thing.

but honestly I think something like that actually exactly what @stephie was going for. The guy either doesn’t know any better or is something of a coward, and the girl is forced…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle lol, I mean like you gotta work with what you have haha

Toothpick swords are awesome.

@theducktator your duck stories genuinely sound amazing lol

@elishavet-pidyon haha!! your cat and dog kingdoms sound great, and yeah the map thing gets crazy sometimes. I think in me and my brother’s stories, we kinda have a general idea of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Oops. Once again the amazingly brilliant Koshka forgets to complete and submit her RP. XD

Leo

The street was quiet, making him glanced at passing windows to watch their reflection.

Still no agents.

But his shoulders itched with the feeling of something just beyond perception. Irritating. He shoved his hands in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Covid 19 was not the plague.

more people died falling out of their BEDS or being bit by SNAKES then from Covid.

Oh, right.

Well then. If you will, allow me to rephrase that:

Watch out,  Joseph, Plauge restrictions are headed your way!

@ellette-giselle

He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.

If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎

Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.

Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!

You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.

Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.

One thing that caught me:

Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…

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@ellette-giselle

“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.

Out of curiousity, is this a Bible study or a church service?

Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?

William looked up and something flickered through his eyes. “I did you k…

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@ellette-giselle

That’s some stunningly flawless reasoning you’ve got there.

@stephie

I also really want another chapter from Linus.

Of TNPT or the boy stranded on the island story I’ve been putting on this forum?

@ellette-giselle

How did you get Mark Rober on your side?

@ellette-giselle

Yay! I had just given up on you and was preparing the next section to post. 

Sorry, a large final assignment pounced out of nowhere on me and I spent the last couple of days working on it and another final assignment. I also had to work for the last two days. But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!

I…

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@ellette-giselle

At long last, Joseph introduced them to David, who shook hands all over again. Then, they hurried to the sitting room. The whole family was quickly introduced, and the hugging and handshaking began all over again. At last, Joseph reached out and took Amelia’s hand, leading her up to his family.

Everyone met everyone, y…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Unfortunately, not all of us have that luxury.

@ellette-giselle

I acted out the entire Narnia series with my dolls once.

I love that. XD

@theducktator oh that’s so cute with the ducks having to take a journey to get to the others. I love it.

@ellette-giselle I never liked dolls growing up and didn’t have any, but I did have TONS of stuffed animals and when I was 8 or 9, I often acted out elaborate stories with them at night when I was supposed to be sleeping.

Re-enacting Narnia…[Read more]

@stephie

TBH, Whaley, Ellette and Koshka are all basically saying riffs on the same thing from what I can tell. It’s ok to have a girl fighting if she needs to (or if she thinks she needs to, which could be an important character arc), but don’t make her into what’s basically a guy with long hair and wide hips. (I mean, like the judge Deborah in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Here’s 1,255 of the 1750 words I need to write. (still have some more to go🫠)

the first thing is all from 1 scene, but each separated section is random snippets of it bc I’m not being an organized writer today XD it’s Leon/Riker’s 3rd novel

the second part is a couple of scenes from Erich/Esther’s novel✨

“He’s not the fat…

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@ellette-giselle

Also, if you are wondering about my feedback for CR, don’t worry! I’m getting there. I have to beta-read something for another person first. Then I’ll get to yours.