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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get to become Christians before something bad happens. You know.
Yes. It’s not always God’s will to save everyone we want to be saved, and I’m kind of glad you included it because of that. Your story could become d…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Hard to be friendly when you have sharp teeth.
*Sends meme to my sister (not the one who wrote A Parched Land)*
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Was Liam’s original name Ezra? I caught a second sentence other than the one hybrid mentioned where you called him that instead:
Sabina kept on doing it, and Ezra relaxed. Sabina pressed gentle fingers against his wrist and then looked up at Joseph. “He’s slipping,” she said softly.
This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Chris…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else
I signed up!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I love it!! I was definitely surprised, that Amelia and Joseph wanted to adopt him so soon. We didn’t really get to see Sabina’s reaction.
I just caught two typos:
Without a word, Sabina gathered him up in her arms, and Ezra laid his head against her, his eyes closing. Sabina rocked him, humming softly.
I think this is meant to…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Keep in mind there are other digital art programs out there, and there are a lot of different choices. @mineralizedwritings @loopylin and @grcr (I think) also draw digital art.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
If you purchase the Apple app, it’s a one-time purchase of around $15.
I researched it and decided the best use for it would be on an Apple ipad and Apple pen, which are the expensive part of the deal. I saved up and bought all that for around $400… Yeeeaah, that’s where the money goes. XD
I’m not sure what other devices you…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Thx!
I use Procreate all. The. Time. These days, I do most of my art on there instead of traditional. There’s a bit of a learning curve, but it’s fun once you get the hang of it.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Noooo, not more deaths!😭
So I’m not the only one who likes Leon best. 🙂
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @everyone-else-who’s-posted-boards-here-recently
I stalk this chat and always forget to actually type stuff, lol. I love all your boards!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae @ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @raxforge @calyhuge
For those who read my Scars story during the 1st contest, here’s a picture of the characters!!!! Pardon me if you never read it…I tagged everyone who participated in that contest.
All the drawing skills/credit goes to my younger sister, Christiana. I simply directed her on…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Great! Thanks!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Sure! (: I use an art program called procreate, but this is probably possible on other programs too. I make two copies of the photo and overlay one on top of the other. I find a way to switch the bottom photo to black and white. Then I erase the parts of the top photo that I want to be uncolored, and merge the top photo into the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Don’t worry. XD
Leo
His eyebrows shot up. A car? That helped the fight scene make a lot more sense, but-
Mechanical injuries. He blinked, grimaced, and slipped off his helmet.
“Yes ma’am. I’ll do what I can.”
He slipped through the door, softly closing it behind him. All was quiet. For a few moments, Leo let…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
FINALLY!!!!!!!! Sorry for the long wait, power.
Ellette! Please enter a story!!! I don’t want to be the only participant!!!! In fact, I’ll tag some people to see if they’re entering.
Here’s the link to my story. I did think of posting it here…but it was pretty long. Just ask me for access, and I’ll give it to…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
This is true 😁 But it’s difficult for people to participate at the school when a lot of the attention is directed outside of it. We have to scroll for 20-something pages.
It’s still fun to deviate a little, don’t get me wrong, but we have to keep past lore in mind.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Sorry for her tone, she’s a bit frustrated
Barnes
Leo appeared, uninjured and full of energy. He walked up the steps with concern in his eyes. “Where is – are you alright?”
“He’s in there.” Barnes pointed her thumb at the doors. She had resettled herself on her knees, rebuttoning her shirt after checking her…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Other then that……I don’t know if I want to say it was good because this is so bad. Poor Alan. But it was a……. hmmm……. a well done chapter.
Thank you!
He just asked for forgiveness, not mercy. They often go hand in hand, but they are not the same. To forgive doesn’t mean you take away the punishment.
Good point.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Only Beric remained cold toward them. No, it wasn’t really coldness, Joseph decided. It was more of a hesitance and perhaps fear. He reminded Joseph of a wounded animal. He often sat in the corner and watched the children from a distance. He flashed angrily if any reference was made to his injured leg, and he only spoke when n…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle BRUHHHH My mom showed me that one once, it’s hilarious
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh, sorry, I got confused and messed the link up.
Here is the correct one:
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