Ellette Giselle

@liberty

Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*

I’m afraid not 😔

What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct

@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else

Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅

a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you very much for the feedback! I will get to reading through it later.

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

The soup began to hiss, so A…

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@ellette-giselle

We’ll see if this works, but I have decided randomly and impulsively that I will have this whole book posted on here by the end of the year.

Expect big sections in the time to come.

However, if I’m going to get this done it means that those of y’all who do make comments will have bigger sections to comment on. If that’s too dif…

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@ellette-giselle

Now THAT might have just been your best chapter ever. I could feel Alan, I could sense that he was completely trust the Saviour, yet there was also pain with it, but his grief was quiet by now. If you could make the grief in the chapter before this more forceful then it would beautiful contrast to the calm in this one.

Thank you!…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

This will answer your question about the feedback I’m looking for.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @loopylin @theshadow

I made up a feedback file with questions I would like you to answer about my book. Do you have to? No. I understand if it’s too much and if you don’t have enough time, but I would really…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was just talking about your Scottish heritage with Joy, one of my older sisters, and she wanted to know if you go to any Highland Games.

Do you?

By the way, your clan motto is amazing! It’s so cool that they were Covenanters. We can’t say that for our clan. Though we know there were some Sutherland covenanters, the majority…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

No, I haven’t read it! I was just looking at the preview a few days ago, and suddenly thought, “Hey! Isn’t this the picture on Ellette’s profile?”

@ellette-giselle

Also, how did you first learn about the BFA?

@ellette-giselle

Whoa. Can I ask how much of the book is still left? That seems like it’s going to be a lot of sections.

I don’t mind the longer pieces, though, (🤪) as long as you’re okay with me not being as nitpicky. Im not sure if you’re mainly wanting feedback on bigger things or if you want me to catch all the typos and everything too. If…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

By the way, how many siblings do you have? Are you the oldest?

I have four siblings: two older sisters, one older brother, and one younger sister.

I’m right in between my brother and younger sister.

@ellette-giselle

Is that good or bad? lolol

Alastair isn’t Gollum! *gasp* how horrid!

It’s not that Alastair is Gollum. Just the name “The Hunt for Alastair” brought “The Hunt for Gollum”  to mind.

giggles sheepishly.

Well, being German as well as Scottish, I have a special place for Scots and Germans. Though I may be partial to German boy…

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@ellette-giselle

Oh this is WAY better then Mufasa!

Okay…I’ll see what I think.

No, I haven’t. My family is waiting for a time when we can watch it without my very little sister. She couldn’t see a movie like that!

Gotcha.

@ellette-giselle

Oh! My father and older siblings went and saw Bonhoeffer. I was too busy to go, but I’m planning on seeing it later. They said it was AMAZING. My oldest sister especially loved it! It was SO moving. Have you seen it yet?

@ellette-giselle

Ah, okay! Thanks! From what you said about it, I’ll definitely be checking it out! My siblings and I will probably watch it during our parents next date night. That or Mufasa.

Have you seen Mufasa yet? I’m really excited to see it!

@ellette-giselle

We need The Hunt For Alastair, or something like that. Maybe Fergus and Jigson team up to find him!!

Gahahaha!!! It’s sounds like Legolas and Aragorn looking for Gollum!

No, no, no! No Fergus and Abby. They would never work. They would kill each other!

Wait…seriously? Kill each other? But I totally agree. They wouldn’t make t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

This is amazing! I never met anyone else who read these!!

Me too!!!!!!!! Now you are really my favorite KPer to snowball. I was hoping on finding some people during CWW who read them, but now I’ve found you!!!!!! It’s amazing!

@ellette-giselle

It’s not the worst ending though. Think if the series had ended when Jigson died!!!

Oh my gosh. That would make me cry so badly!

My siblings and I are adamant that Fergus must go and find Alastair! I mean, Jigson started telling him about a certain King…so there’s got to be more! And we don’t know what happened to Tristan, C…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It’s streaming starting today so you can probably find it pretty easy.

Wait, where is it streaming?