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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 hours, 21 minutes ago
THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?! Okay that got me, that hit really hard oh my goodness. Wow.
“He shielded his wife with his own body. That lion is still trying to tare him off of her. I don’t she’s even been touched, but that beast is furious.”
Awww 🥺
Ignatius stepped a…
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 hours, 24 minutes ago
You’re welcome! I’m excited for the next chapter.
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 hours, 35 minutes ago
Man… that hit hard. Really hard. I may or may not have almost started crying at the end there. Great job, I noticed you put in more descriptions of the colosseum, and that really helped to imagine the inside of the colosseum. The atmosphere was good as well, and everything was great!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 6 hours, 55 minutes ago
I have to brush my sister’s hair, and then I should just about have this next chapter ready for you!
Okay, can’t wait!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 7 hours, 14 minutes ago
Do you think Julius is going to believe?
Hmm, I’m not sure. The way he’s acting, trying only to preserve himself, it doesn’t seem like he will. Or maybe when he’s see Marcus and Flavia die (if they do) then he’ll come to faith. Sigh, it’s another game of will-he-won’t-he XD
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 7 hours, 19 minutes ago
I LOVE IT!!!! Thank you so much, it’s so good! I like it in black and white, and also I haven’t figured out his surcoat yet lol. Thanks again, I really appreciate it!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 7 hours, 21 minutes ago
Chapter 13 and 14 are really smooth, the scenes were good and atmospheric. The only thing I noticed which isn’t even a big issue is that you used Caesar’s name instead of Nero’s in chapter 13 at some point. It was great though!! Once again, Julius’ inner conflict was portrayed well.
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 3 minutes ago
I’d join too…except I don’t write enough to have a competition XDD
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RAE replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 23 hours, 20 minutes ago
Yeah, I got it. Sorry about not replying, but doing so would tempt me to disclose some of my thoughts before July 11th.
Thx for checking though!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 2 hours ago
DROPPING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Just so you know, it’s not edited…heh…heh…
so just bear with me XD
Tags: @jonas @grcr @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @rae @and-my-brain-stopped-working
“Please! Someone help me!” Neveah gasped for breath, frantically scanning the crowds for a familiar face.
Where could Sef have gon…
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 2 hours ago
Sorry it took a sec!
That’s okay!
“Julius, what a surprise,” Ignatius said in a low voice. “I see that you were a traitor all along.”
I KNEW IT! I KNEW YOU COULDNT BE TRUSTED IGNATIUS!!!
Chapter 11 and 12 were great, although it seems to me like more than two months had passed since Julius and Marcus last saw each other. Ma…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 2 hours ago
Chapter four was really smooth and was a lot easier to follow! I don’t have hardly any comments.
Except maybe one thing…maybe give more detail about why Julius is so mad that Marcus is missing. It just kind of shows Julius “throwing a fit” for no apparent reason. Maybe show us his thoughts about why is is scared/angry and…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 2 hours ago
I am so sorry…I just can’t keep up with the ammount of chapters you write
That’s insane XD XD
I will try to go over chapter 3/4 soon, I forgot where I left off!!
But about the plot, I was just wondering what your storyline looked like.
I was concerned that you might not have enough plot for a full novel, but since it’s a…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 6 hours ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 7 hours ago
Now someone is starting to get tangled in the is-he-is-he-not? phase. Love it!!
I can’t make up my mind about Ignatius XD
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
So there’s this unwritten rule on KP about joining new topics, and it basically goes like this, “Pop in wherever you want”. If you want to join the conversation, you just do. If you feel bad about it, don’t, because everyone does it too.
I understand the feeling, like you’re barging into a stranger’s house when you’re new here,…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 day, 9 hours ago
Thank you for sending him! I love drawing for people!
Of course, thanks so much for drawing him! Also, somehow I forgot to mention this, but he’s a knight.
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Stephie replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
So…I think it’s a really good idea. I mean, this is a dark world, although it’s not as dark as the world you might be writing about. But it’s still riddled with sin. I think that writing a book around horrible topics might just allow the goodness of God to shine through even more strongly–just like how a light is brighter in a dark…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
Ooh that’s really good advice, I’ll keep it in mind, thanks!!
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