Ellette Giselle

I am interested in theory. Thing is, I like to keep my outline secret (HUGE outliner here 😂), and I don’t like sharing large amounts of my work on forums. I’m not against getting critiques from people, it’s more a matter of controlling who has access to my writing.

If my dad helps me set up an account on a secure writing software, something I can…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yay!!

I survived ENT! 🙂 I suspected my vasovagal syncope would trigger, but it didn’t, and that was a good thing.

@the_lost-journal @rae

Selfish because she keeps everything to herself XD

Barnes

Cassius and Leander, one after the other, lay down on the moss. Night had not fully fallen yet, and the other adventures in the labyrinth surely still walked around – but both boys seemed tired from the walk. Their emotional outbursts had not helped their energy…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle That was close. Good thing that soldier doesn’t seem to know him.

I kinda also wanna know what was on the poster.

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 29!

@ellette-giselle

I guess I doesn’t really matter anyway. It’s just something that throws me off, but after you get into the story, its clear who you are talking about.

@ellette-giselle

still very confused…. Washing soap?

With more soap, of course.

I guess I wasn’t washing the soap directly, but at the store I work at, we sell unpack aged bars of different soaps. Bits of them chip off and it can get really messy, so one in a while we have to clean that and the building dust out of there and reorganize the soap b…[Read more]

@jonas I’d love to join! I do have a summer job (lunch break rn), so I’m not sure how much time and energy I’ll actually have, but I would really love to have other people pushing me to get writing done.

I’ll have a hard time picking which story to work on though.

@ellette-giselle

what?!

Like I said, yesterday was ironic.

Anyways. History lesson.

Aggressive people do not mix with stallions.

Okay, those explanations make sense.

I guess I refer to Daniel’s friends that way because that’s the way I always do in my mind. They are actually refereed to more in that way then by their Babylonian names, It’s just…

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@keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

It’s Tuesday! I have two new chapters for you guys. (Then I probably should go down to one a week.)

Hmmm. I do want more accountability in my work. I don’t follow a traditional outline in the WIP I decided to focus on for the Summer, but I can get a Chapter/Word outline thingy put together, if that’s wanted.

I am working at a church/Bible college campground for the Summer though, so hours and stuff are gonna be weird. But at the same time, I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations on your graduation!

I was gonna give people a chance to catch up

Sorry, it was a busy weekend and yesterday was rather ironic. It was a holiday yesterday, so I had to work for most of it and I spent at least an hour cleaning soap. Who thought that soap needed to be cleaned? Anyway, I’ll get into the feedback…[Read more]

I’ll see if I have time. I have rowing to do, plus I’m looking into getting a job this summer as well as taking the first steps to getting my driver’s permit since I’m turning 16 end of July and would like to get my permit as soon as possible. If I have time, I’d be interested!

Not sure what I’d write yet though…

@jonas

I will join if other people are interested!

@ellette-giselle

You’re really just going to leave me hanging like that?? 😳

@jonas

It sounds like a super fun idea! I don’t know if I’ll participate this time, though, since I’m kind of in the middle of my WIP and already have some people critiquing it. Thanks for the invite! Oh, and like Ellette said, if you happen to need some outsiders to force help people get writing, I could probably do that! 😁

@jonas

I’d be willing to give it a shot. I need to start actually writing again so this could help.

@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I never color the original, I like to keep a backup.

That’s the true advice.

YES!!! DO!!!

I’ll see to finishing it when I get home, then. XD