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Loopy replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 4 months ago
This might not be very accurate, but here:
A country girl makes it her life’s purpose to rid a city of its helpful police robots.
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Felicity
After seeing Soldier come back with the dead body of a dragon and drop it in front of them like a cat would with a mouse carcass, Felicity decided she was grateful to be these people’s ally.
They arrived at the cave and settled down. Someone had suggested starting a fire, but they had little luck finding any wood that wasn’t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper I wanna boop the long snoot
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Here is my feeble attempt at keeping this thing going
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Felicity
“Alright, well, mission accomplished. You made it to your class. About time I head to mine.”
Fel turned to leave, giving Chase a playful but gentle punch to the shoulder. She winked.
“It was fun hanging out.”
Then she walked out of the field and back to the school buildin…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Me when I lose my spot while archiving this rp and have to scroll back 200+ pages to find it again:

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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃
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Enid replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Ohhhh that makes more sense.
And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.
I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
The thing is I relise I’ve been spending way too much time on the computer and my phone recently. I think I need to take a break. So the plan is, once I am done the draft of my current work in progress, to take a step back from electronics for a bit and actually do some real things, like touch grass again. (Ah… grass…). For…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Boom, finally caught up
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*
*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*
I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.
You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…
The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Update!
I got Scrivener, and after playing around a bit, I think I’m going to love it. I still haven’t figured out some of the quirks like how to paste into it without turning everything blue. However, I love how it has alowed me to organize each WIP into one individual file with multiple subfiles. It’s also nice to have it off line, so I can…[Read more]
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Enid started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 4 months ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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