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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 19 hours, 37 minutes ago
Other then that……I don’t know if I want to say it was good because this is so bad. Poor Alan. But it was a……. hmmm……. a well done chapter.
Thank you!
He just asked for forgiveness, not mercy. They often go hand in hand, but they are not the same. To forgive doesn’t mean you take away the punishment.
Good point.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 19 hours, 39 minutes ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 19 hours, 46 minutes ago
Only Beric remained cold toward them. No, it wasn’t really coldness, Joseph decided. It was more of a hesitance and perhaps fear. He reminded Joseph of a wounded animal. He often sat in the corner and watched the children from a distance. He flashed angrily if any reference was made to his injured leg, and he only spoke when n…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 20 hours, 5 minutes ago
@stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Messed up the last link. The correct one is in my previous post on here.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 20 hours, 5 minutes ago
Oh, sorry, I got confused and messed the link up.
Here is the correct one:
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 20 hours, 9 minutes ago
I know you haven’t been following it, but I hope you don’t mind if I just use all my snowballs for my current WIP. I just found out I have to work a lot through the holidays, so I want to focus on TNPT: The Cost – Draft 2 so I can achieve my goal of completing it before the year ends.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 20 hours, 12 minutes ago
There, just did a chapter with 2,458 words.
I don’t feel like throwing any snowballs at the moment, so I’m going to build a fort with the 16 snowballs I earned from that.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 20 hours, 14 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Here we go. Are you ready?
I think you can tell what direction I’m going with this, but I want to hear your thoughts before we see what Alan does. What do you think Alan should do and why?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 20 hours, 22 minutes ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 20 hours, 59 minutes ago
I DIDN’T SEE THIS.
I’M GOING TO DIE D:
LOLOL
So I see you have chosen death! XD
And now that I have finished my words…
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Ten snowballs coming at you!
*Most evil laugh*
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Loopy posted an update 21 hours, 6 minutes ago
I’ve made no progress on my book’s word count, but the Lois in my head has a dog now
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Loopy replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 21 hours, 9 minutes ago
@whalekeeper Hey it’s no face guy! Glad you found a name for him. Also the board is pretty. I love the black and white with the little pops of color
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 21 hours, 15 minutes ago
But I won’t be personally offended or anything if you do decide to kill him, im just sharing my opinion
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 21 hours, 15 minutes ago
We all have to somehow make sure we’re all on the same team, that would be so funnn!!!
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 21 hours, 16 minutes ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 21 hours, 17 minutes ago
Also, Eddie was so close to asking him out to the dance
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 21 hours, 17 minutes ago
Yes, it looks like so much fun and will definitely help me get back into the rhythm of writing! I don’t see why not! I”ll probably sign up today.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 21 hours, 18 minutes ago
Hi people I’ve been stalking
@ellette-giselle Please don’t kill off Rory. I know that’s what happens in his main story, but this is supposed to be a what if. We’ve already deviated so much from the main tone of the roleplay by killing an agent and leaving school campus. You can do whatever you want, of course, but I personally found this roleplay…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 21 hours, 20 minutes ago
Praise the Lord! I’ll keep praying!! <33
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 21 hours, 24 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Leo
Here we are. The apartment rose up on the right just as the lorry slowed down. Leo came to his feet with the rolling stop, one hand on the back wall to steady himself. He scooped Quincy back up into his shoulder and reached for Silvia. “Come on, Sis.”
They shuffled down the aisle and out the…[Read more]
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