@ellette-giselle
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Oh yeah! Tyn does not like doing dishes, so Alan could be her hero, cleaning up after she finishes cooking something.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Ah, yeah, that should work, I think… roughly two weeks from when you posted the description.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@Anyone who cares XD
I would like to note that Leo’s response was a panic attack, and was not due to Marcel. He’s a uh… engineer of sorts. He’s just weird.
I actually do something similar except with imaginary sewing patterns and fabric.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Where is my nagging deadline?
See my previous post.
I listened to your soundtrack suggestions, thank you for sharing them. Here are my thoughts.
Alan theme: Looking at the lyrics for this, this does not quite work for him. However, there is another character that this is almost a perfect fit for. I think the lyrics of this work…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
I’ve read everything up until now and am patiently (read: impatiently) awaiting the next chapter.
I am aiming to release this by the 21st. Realised for the first part of the chapter I still needed to figure something out, but I am close to coming up with a solution, so I should be able to start working on in soon amid my assignments.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
Leo
“See her sword?”
Leo smiled. It did have a pointy blade thing. In fact, the crisply folded paper was looked remarkably like the strange metal figures he’s seen around the city. Statues of heros from many worlds, or so he’d been told.
The paper was obviously not some type of ink lot tes…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
*Applause*
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Aww they look so cute together! <3
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@anyonewhothismighthaveconfused
A note: Leo is not inside the elevator. It opened and closed behind him.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
I appreciate your years of KP prowess, and I hope you will grace us with your KaPeefer knowledge 😁
*curtsey*
I hope I can be of some assistance.
Full disclosure though, I have only been an actual member for…3 years? But I was acquainted with the kingdom since some time before that.
*waves hand vaguely since I can’t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle @loopylin @whalekeeper @keilah-h
XD
Leo
He felt his shoulder collide with the elevator door as he jerked backwards, away from the flying whatever it was.
He blinked.
It was a boy. With feathers. And pink hair. He stood on a table waving some sheet of paper like a forlorn banner. He began folding it with precise carelessness…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
It doesn’t? Hmm.
On second thought, no it really doesn’t. XD
But it does fit Leo in a kinda weird way.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
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RAE replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m game!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Leo is between 19-21, so young man. (He’s from a sci-fi WIP/different world where the year is slightly longer).
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Leo
“Any of you guys got any cool stories for us?”
Stories. So many stories. The principal’s gummy worm addiction. The Calculus instructor’s secret pet cobra. Silvia’s lab incident…his eyebrows pinched together.sure there were stories. There was also a job to try and not get fired from. Leo closed the b…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Thank you for mentioning that. I see your confusion. I might use Furr, since I don’t think I have used that as a name in this story. I also may add a sassy note from the narrator that will be something like the following:
(No, not Nehss as in the soldier we met earlier, this is a different Nesss. While spelling varies, it is a very…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Are you the eldest child? (The reason I ask is that some of Martha’s frustrations come from me being the eldest child, and I am wondering if people who are not eldest children also find her relatable.)
Also, it sounds like you have read everything I have posted so far. I take it you do much to say, but I am curious to know what…[Read more]
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