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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 18 hours ago
Oops. Once again the amazingly brilliant Koshka forgets to complete and submit her RP. XD
Leo
The street was quiet, making him glanced at passing windows to watch their reflection.
Still no agents.
But his shoulders itched with the feeling of something just beyond perception. Irritating. He shoved his hands in…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
Covid 19 was not the plague.
more people died falling out of their BEDS or being bit by SNAKES then from Covid.
Oh, right.
Well then. If you will, allow me to rephrase that:
Watch out, Joseph, Plauge restrictions are headed your way!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 19 hours ago
Okay. I’ll be working on that right away. I did get called into work unexpectedly today, so it will take longer than I was hoping, but I hopefully will post the next chapter soon.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.
If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎
Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.
Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!
You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.
One thing that caught me:
Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.
Out of curiousity, is this a Bible study or a church service?
Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?
William looked up and something flickered through his eyes. “I did you k…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 20 hours ago
That’s some stunningly flawless reasoning you’ve got there.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 21 hours ago
I also really want another chapter from Linus.
Of TNPT or the boy stranded on the island story I’ve been putting on this forum?
How did you get Mark Rober on your side?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 days, 21 hours ago
Please don’t burn me at the stake, but fruitcake is AMAZING and an essential part of Christmas.
When someone comes into the bulk food store and buys the glased fruit to make a fruit cake after I just cleaned the scoops.
Me:
I can’t wait for this part of Christmas to be over…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 days, 21 hours ago
Yes, I do celebrate Christmas. My dad loves the season and has a playlist with over 1000 tracks on an old iPod that is played throughout December every year. We build jigsaw puzzles (many of them). Christmas Eve is when we open gifts as a family, and on Christmas day we head out to my grandparent’s church.
Our church throws a…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 21 hours ago
Yay! I had just given up on you and was preparing the next section to post.
Sorry, a large final assignment pounced out of nowhere on me and I spent the last couple of days working on it and another final assignment. I also had to work for the last two days. But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!
I…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 6 days, 21 hours ago
My characters are separated into groups/by themselves at the moment, but they are going to meet up at some point in the not so distant future. I think there are two together, and the other four are alone somewhere, but two of them will meet up shortly.
That could work then.
I might write that question on a sticky note and stick it to…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 6 days, 21 hours ago
I’m not too worried about Kal because I feel like it would be a terrible end to his arc if he died, and Sanderson knows that (hopefully).
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 22 hours ago
At long last, Joseph introduced them to David, who shook hands all over again. Then, they hurried to the sitting room. The whole family was quickly introduced, and the hugging and handshaking began all over again. At last, Joseph reached out and took Amelia’s hand, leading her up to his family.
Everyone met everyone, y…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 22 hours ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 22 hours ago
Okay…I’m finally coming to reply to you! Thank you for waiting.
One thing I’ve been thinking about a lot, especially since I’ve gotten back and have been able to reflect on everything, is what exactly is discipleship and how do we live it out? Looking at discipleship in the time of Jesus, it was a common practice for young Jew…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
I’m glad it’s a good one. I’ve imagined telling it to little kids at reenactments (Which is to say, I’ve imagined being in reenactments).
Crater Base sounds interesting! Sibling built stories are the best.
You know, we played some elaborate games with our dolls, Littlest Petshops, and LEGOs, but I think our stuffed animals were the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper
I wrote a happy scene and a rather sad scene. However, the happy scene would makes very little sense to anyone reading the story, so I’m sharing the sad one. XD
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There was too much silence in his room. Onnendel pushed himself up on his elbow to see over the mound of pillows. The sunlight that splashed across…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
That is, if you want some backstory set up for our serial story that’s currently on pause. 🙂
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I’m not sure how anyone could forget Riker is German tbh🤣🤣
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