Ellette Giselle

@linus-smallprint

Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱

I understand that though.

A World War II spy story!

Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.

@hybridlore

I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]

@koshka

Really?! Ah yay!!!

Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!

Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?

@jonas

Okay…… I put yes…. but that honestly depends on what kind of time I have. I may have to drop back to feedback…. or nothing.

@hybridlore

Wait really!!!!

*jumps around cheering*

Yahoo!!!!

@keilah-h

Oh, I write all of the above plus some. idk. The MC is a teenage guy in most of it, but then so were Joseph and Aaron. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@keilah-h

Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!

What do your brothers love so much about it?

I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I will. It’ll be a bit odd this time because I feel like I already asked most of them on LOS. I should have a few though.

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!! Linus saves the day. Why didn’t I think of that with Flavia? 🤦🏼‍♀️

Good. Good. I’m glad the time skip works.

The person was an acolyte of the priests who saw what happened.

Thank you for sharing your series with us! If I remember correctly, it was just about a year ago that you started posting the first book…

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@hybridlore

Okay, I only got one.

idk if you saw my email, but it won’t let me past your safety measures.

@hybridlore

Where are the links?

@keilah-h

Lolol. You’re welcome.

@hybridlore

Oh yay!! I was so sad when I went to comment and realized I couldn’t.

@hybridlore     @keilah-h

Lolololol.

Okay, well Joseph and Amelia ended up having nine kids. Mercy was the oldest of their children, with Beric being the oldest through adoption. (of that makes sense)

Beric and Quin designed a network of guys who went throughout Ardenta helping farmers recover land and people rebuild after the war. These g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

No. I can’t. Not without an account. 😥

Could you try using Microsoft? I have an account with them, and it’s not attached to google. It’s honestly safer, which is why I went with them. And You can set it up for free.

@hybridlore

*Crying because I can’t comment or see y’all’s comments*

Nooo, this is so sad.

😭

Oh well. I guess it can’t be helped.

@keilah-h

Well that’s good.

@hybridlore

Yeah, but he doesn’t know about them.

I do though.

if you be nice and say please…..

@hybridlore

yeah, if you let yourself you can see it coming from page 1 of their book. It was always there and always inevitable.

as for Rowan, I believe in Holy election, and because of that, this works. That’s more of a Calvinist view though. Basically, Rowan would have never believed no matter how much time he had, unless God called him. A…[Read more]