Ellette Giselle

@linus-smallprint

Oh…!

*gleeful laughter* does that mean this caught you off guard?

I’m kind of hoping that it will take a lot of time for Leon and Rolf to escape. So, in a weird way, I was glad to see the newcomers didn’t end up being friends, but enemies with a personal grudge against the heroes. I know there have been other dangers and we’ve…

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@linus-smallprint    @Liberty    @Hybridlore     @Koshka    @elishavet-pidyon    @Keilah-h

NEXT SECTION!!!

“So, what do you think we’ll encounter in Clonabay?” Rolf asked.

“Sin and darkness,” Leon replied in a low voice.

Rolf glanced over his shoulder. “I hope Roland’s alright. I’ve seen him get hurt plenty of times, and this is about th…

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@raxforge

AWESOME!

Nailed it!

yippy!

@raxforge

I’m so glad!!

Did I do him right? (I’m not in the habit of drawing skeletal characters. XD)

@raxforge

You may!

And here is your answer!

Hope you like him!!

@theducktator

Here’s You’re girl!!!

@linus-smallprint

Ha!

That’s kind of funny, but Julian would KILL anyone who did that to him.

Plus it seems a little cliched.

BUT, it was funny. XD

@linus-smallprint

Got it.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, I’ll fix that. He was supposed to be joking. If he was joking would it work?

Sorry. Sometimes, I shy away from commitment and speak with uncertainty (that’s one of the ways my character, Eric, is like me). Maybe waiting until they are published would be a good idea, but yes, I will let you use them as a r…

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@linus-smallprint

I thought he might want to turn back and no longer continue with them at this point, seeing this as a sign to return to his village and be with Liesle (if I spelled that right). But he seems determined to keep going for the moment.

Yeah, Roland’s pretty stubborn.

Julian is sounding a bit like a mother here. (I’m not sure i…

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@linus-smallprint

I thought so.

A lot happened in that last section that I was hoping on feedback for, so it was surprising when you didn’t say anything. XD

@liberty

Would you be okay with me moving on? I don’t need you to give instant feedback if you’re unable to keep up.

If you really need me to wait a day though then I can.

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, okay. Well that’s odd.

Okay, so you have reached the point where Roland is injured.

No thoughts on the assassination attempt?

idk what I ended up saying.

Okay…. let me go look.

Thanks for the feedback! I’m glad the characters are becoming more alive! Hybridlore would disagree with you on not having all of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

OH MY GOODNESS!!!

That’s amazing!!! That’s so cool!!!! Wow! I LOVE how you draw scenes like that!

YOU MUST keep that in the book if you publish with illustrations.

@liberty

Okay…. I could wait I day.

@keilah-h

Glad you found that interesting!!

@linus-smallprint

Have you read the latest section I posted yesterday? I couldn’t tell from the feedback how far you still were. (trying to figure out how long I need to pause.)

@linus-smallprint

Yes, I got it.

Not sure if you got my reply….

@keilah-h

Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.

Maybe page 14?

I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.