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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I see, that makes sense. XD
I’m assuming this means your story’s setting is basically an alternate Europe. Is the Common Tongue an English equivalent or something else?
yeah, just about.
Yes, English.
ohhhhh ok! I like the style, it makes it different than the other two
Good. That’s the goal.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yay!!! *dance of victory*
😂😂😂 Talk about a rude awakening!
Lolol.
Well, Leon was hit in the face!!
I’m interested in Leon’s backstory more now. He seems to be hiding something from Julian and the others. It will be interesting to see him go back to where he used to fight.
idk if I’d say hiding it as much as hates to talk abo…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Imperial Winters are not very exciting, so I’m going to try to cover the whole time in this next section. We’ll see if I can pull it off.
The fifteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 2nd
The EmpireEarly this morning, I wa…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Well, I’m guessing someone is going to get thrown into a colosseum. You have five guys there…some of them are bound to get hurt…or killed. It just has to happen.
*shocked gasp* what have I ever done to my characters to make you think such dreadful things!
They technically don’t have a “Colosseum”. Just arenas and amphi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
lolol.
So, any thoughts on the third section? You only mentioned the first and second.
Any guesses concerning the future?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
haha! I was hoping to pull it off! I’ve never drawn anyone quite like her. I’m so happy you like her!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
That section from Aelic reminds me so much of the “Winter King”! So far, I think his salvation story was the best! Well, there weren’t that many details concerning Roland and the others… anyway, that’s what I think.
Funny thing is, I wrote this first, so when I read that I was thinking “this sounds so much like Aelic!” LOL
I’m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
well thanks!
hmm, I guess we see her differently, but I love being able to see how others picture my character.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, I was talking to Linus about that. See, this book is supposed to be fast paced. You meet a lot of unimportant characters and about 50 minorly important ones that show up more than once.
By the 4th book you’ll know the cast well and things may feel less jumpy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
So glad you like her!!!
How are you so good at art?! I love it!!!!!
Like years and years and years of practice. 😅
Glad she’s perfect!
Yay!!! Does she look anything like you imagine?
aw thanks!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Here’s Sara! I hope you like her!
She’s not smiling because I was trying to capture the way she feels to me at this point in the story. Hope that’s okay.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay, well I’m just going to risk it and if you hate her I can try again.
Here’s Carrot Cake.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
ah! Okay.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
well then, I’ll keep it in mind.
I looked it up and it seems like it might be…. claymation? Something like that.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I like dramatic dark things as long as it’s there for a purpose beyond making me scream or feel creeped out. It has to be there for a reason, and the reason needs to be highlighting the light!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Nope, I did it!
thx!
Awesome!
btw, I had your done, but i didn’t like it so I started over. I’ll try to send it tomorrow.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
So, I finished your character, but then I realized I forgot to have her wearing a hoodie!! She’s in a T-shirt currently. So, I could try to re-draw here, or just send what I have. Your choice.
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