Ellette Giselle

@hybridlore

Haha! Yes, Ian is going to be trouble. In fact, he’s going to _______________

What do you think of Albee? (btw, I love that I gave him a big long name. 😂 It’s just so funny to me, because it totally doesn’t fit him.)

@raxforge    @theducktator

He reached for his knife.

He’s gonna die.

Don’t stab already dead men. It doesn’t pay off. Ask Gimli

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For anyone interested in the song that I showed part of, here it is:

(It’s a medieval song from the Underground Church.)

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Leon looked at the shafts of sunlight moving across the floor of the hold as the ship rocked up and down in the waves. He and Rolf had been held captive down here for over two weeks. The ship had come to a stop at two other places, and they h…

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@hybridlore
@keilah-h

okay!! Thanks for the suggestions!! I’ll rework a few scenes.

@liberty

oh man. I have had some of the WORST sprains ever!! One took almost two months to heal!
Roland’s is not as severe, and he has been off of it for four days and as you can see he starts limping when they travel again.

Oooh! I love Dian!

you just love sailor characters. 😝

Is that why you like him? Or for other reasons too?

As for what w…[Read more]

@theshadow

NICE!!

I really like it! I had hopes for Dylan and they seem to be coming through! Yay!!

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint

So, keilah likes the scene that you have a problem with, linus! This is great. 🤣

Here’s an idea. What if I shift it a little so that the conversation happened a day or two after they had already been on the ship? Do you think that would work?

@keilah-h

So you like it? You think i should keep it?

@linus-smallprint

I have also considered making up a world with my friends and doing our own fantasy RPG in it.

Hey, that could be interesting!

Yikes! That’s scary

yeah. No kidding.

@linus-smallprint

aaannnddd I may have overrated. I just….. yeah, I have opinions about that game.

@linus-smallprint

NO!!! No don’t do D&D. My two of my mom’s guy friends were killed through that game when she was a teenager.

I mean, you can do it with you want, but I’d really look into the history of that game. I know I’m asking for it, but that game originally had a lot of demonic attachments, and it’s something I’ve always steered clear of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah that would work!

@linus-smallprint

Julian is certainly a blame others type, considering his reaction to Adrian’s death. Leon, I’m not so sure about it.

Yes, very much so.

I’m not really sure either. He’s somewhere in the middle honestly.

No. We still have it, though we haven’t played it for a while. We just ignore the story when we do play it.

Ah, one of those…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

he’ll go doggedly on.

I was stunned for almost a week and didn’t think clearly.

(again, different person. But trauma does weird things)

@raxforge

Oh my word.

Why are all your characters so messed up?!?!

(quickly hides Rory because he’s totally not messed up)

😂😝

@whalekeeper

Horse what???

What did I just see?

@hybridlore

You’re welcome! I’d love to see Everette in a bind like that, and maybe someone surprising like Cole (could be a really cool moment) is like, “hold on a sec, he got less time then the rest of us,” or something like that.

Just a thought. It could show an interesting angle on the dislike of any sort of Christian beliefs or standings.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Nope.

I wouldn’t think so.

I think he’ll run until he drops (basiclly) and then he’ll either be so dead tired that he sleeps hard, or he’ll fight nightmares and flashbacks. I don’t think he’ll have time to think about this sort of things.

Out of experience, when you go through trauma parts of your mind just kind of turn off…[Read more]