Ellette Giselle

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, I like it!

Let’s see. How about nothing to do with the characters. Mention what’s going on around them. Someone shouted something, pans clattered, wind picked up, a bird chirped, children giggled. Etc. That might help.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, now I’m starting to believe that sign.

@linus-smallprint

I literally saw this on my way home from work. I could not restrain myself. Sorry Linus.

@linus-smallprint

Yay! The tag worked!

I am curious what this hat looks like. Is this one of those flat hats, with a brim that goes over the eyes?

I’m not sure. This is what it looks like:

Is this the first time you have left Aaron’s perspective?

Yessssss………. but I was thinking about doing it in the next section and wanted to do it m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Haha!!! I have No idea what you are talking about. It’s not like I’m driving and my dad says, “Turn left” so I hold up my hands just to make sure which way is left………………..

@theducktator

YES!! You are not the only one!

@theducktator

Thank you!!

@keilah-h

They are literally standing outside the elevator.

@keilah-h

Well that’s a relief! lol.

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

The next morning, Aaron was so sore he could hardly walk. He staggered downstairs and found Alicia in the kitchen, fixing breakfast. Sabina was upstairs getting the little children dressed. Alicia looked up when Aaron entered. “Good morning, Aaron.” She nodded toward the table. “Sabina left that for you.”

Aaron walked…

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@rae @freed_and_redeemed

I may be wrong, but to me Steve seems like a good old Oatmeal Raisin type guy.

@linus-smallprint

Sure thing!

@rae

YES! DO!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad you like them!

Yes!!! I love that scene!!!

@linus-smallprint

No problem. I’m only a little bit eager for you to read this because as soon as you are done I can send it to me editor……. no pressure. I don’t know why @keilah-h has dropped out of this. I’m guessing she’s still reading…..

Do you want me to tag you again if you have not responded by Thursday, in case for some reason…[Read more]