Ellette Giselle

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad to hear that!

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@whalekeeper

huh. interesting.

I might have to look into that.

Thanks!!

@whalekeeper

is there a free version?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…

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@liberty

I really like this picture!!! So good!

Congrats on the win!

I’m glad Power judged because I wouldn’t have been able to submit anything today. With Christmas right around the corner I’m swamped!

@whalekeeper

That is so cool!

*Goes to look it up.*

@theducktator

Thank you!

@whalekeeper

I had to manually go in and change a lot of things because I wanted only parts of some of the pictures to be colored.

How did you do that? I must know!

@whalekeeper     @koshka

(We can head back to school in the morning/whenever. Rory needs to be Leo’s assistant, right? Or are the two going their separate ways?)

Rory

Rory just lay there, listening to the steps. He felt himself go ridged out of instinct, but he didn’t run. Someone got down beside him and Rory closed his eyes, waiting for the…[Read more]

@liberty

Okay I’ll try to get one done tomorrow.

@whalekeeper

I don’t think Koshka and I thought anyone was going to follow us…. 😁

@koshka

haha!

I heard that!

@linus-smallprint

Reminds me of someone else. (Sabina)

huh. I hadn’t thought of that.

My first thought was a story about her brother, David.

ah, whoops. I can fix that.

This felt too quick. He’s gone from cold and only speaking when necessary to suddenly spilling out his entire backstory. Could you show him considering doing this before h…

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@linus-smallprint

I saw that coming and really didn’t want to.

oh why are you so mean! Why are you such a terrible person. *sobbing* (like I have room to talk)

Oh man. He shouldn’t do it, of course! But man, this one is gonna hurt.

One thought.

I know if you choose to punish me instead, I will deserve whatever it is you do.”
He j…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I saw that coming and really didn’t want to.

oh why are you so mean! Why are you such a terrible person. *sobbing* (like I have room to talk)

Oh man. He shouldn’t do it, of course! But man, this one is gonna hurt.

One thought.

I know if you choose to punish me instead, I will deserve whatever it is you do.”

He j…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thank you.

very relieved me goes and starts reading.