Ellette Giselle

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@Koshka

AHHH!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

I can’t wait for more!!!

@grcr

HE IS SO STINKING COOL!!!

That’s slick that is!

Haha! AI murders hands!

Pockets are a good idea. My mom hates drawing hands so she always sketches her characters with them in their pockets or behind their backs. (If you want only one hand in the pocket you can turn the character slightly so that his hip and leg hides the other…[Read more]

@theducktator

YOU JUST RUINED THE TONE OF THAT SCENE!!!! XDXDXD!! lolololol.

@savannah_grace2009

That was really good! I liked it a lot! I have written a few desert scenes myself, and they always make me hot and thirsty. (Great scenes to write in the winter 😉 )

That would be really interesting for water people to be in a place where they…[Read more]

@keilah-h  @liberty

I know!!! But think…. if people in our country school systems and government are trying to make us forget the holocaust….. doesn’t that seems scary. Like, what might they be trying to do in the future?

Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I know!

(btw, are you just snooping on the conversation, or did you read the story section I posted?)

@liberty

I know! We were just reading in Joshua last night in our family devotions about the crossing of the Jordan. One part really struck me. It was this one:

So Joshua called together the twelve men he had appointed from the Israelites, one from each tribe,  and said to them, “Go over before the ark of the Lord your God into the middle of th…[Read more]

@liberty

Yes, it did happen, but a lot of people didn’t realize it. Most times when you say “WWII Germany” everyone else replies “Nazis”. But that’s not all the way true. Yes, there were tones of Nazis and tones of Hitler Youth and Gestapo and SS. But there were also normal people trying to survive, Christians debating weather or not to take a…[Read more]

@liberty

Okay……. Give me a sec……….

Werner whistled cheerily as he made his way down the street and turned toward the hospital entrance. Coming inside, he mounted the stairs and stepped into the hall. Werner looked up and froze. There, about five paces away, stood an SS officer.

Werner glanced back down the stairs and shifted his…

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@liberty

Shall I tell you, or do you want to just read the scene?

@rae

Aw. That’s sad. Thanks for tagging me!!!

@liberty   @koshka  (I’m guessing by your comment that you read the section posted above.)

Do you really want to know if he dies?

(That is actually not the character I killed yesterday. I killed someone else which is why the flashback was there at all.)

Any thoughts on the section?!?!

@liberty

You have been warned.

@freed_and_redeemed

WWII story section! Want to read some?

@esther

Werner scene!

[Werner is having a flashback]

 

“Werner, wait for me!”

                  “Come on, hurry up Wolf!”   

                  Laughter. Someone grabbed his arm and they both spun in a cercle, waving their hands for balance.

 …

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@liberty

Devastating Werner flashback. Want to read some?

@linus-smallprint

Okay, I’ll look at starting in February. I have a novel I’m pushing to finish this month, so that should give me plenty of time to do that.

@linus-smallprint

That is weird.

How long do you want before I start posting the next book?

@linus-smallprint

NOO!! *sobs*

She’s still working on it. Maybe you could do some breathing down her neck for me. I’ve been doing it so much I’ve run out of breath. lololololol.

No, nothing yet. She said she’ll try to have it for me soon. I’ll let y’all know the minute I’ve got it!

@liberty

YOU JUST SNOWBALLED ME!?!?!

Wie kannst du es wagen!! Du wirst es bereuen!