Ellette Giselle

@liberty

They’re relationship is pretty solid. But there are some things that Leon really doesn’t want to talk about. (there are things that have happened to me that I don’t like to talk about unless i really, really trust the person) and I know Leon and Julian trust one another a lot, but talking about some things can be really hard. and it can…[Read more]

hybridlore

Julian’s like “okay dude, this one’s all yours man. All yours.”

😂😂😂

@hybridlore

i know right!

@hybridlore

Hmmm. No promises.

Really out of character for him too! lololol.

I think you’re enjoying the suspense way too much. 🤔🙄

Oh 100%.

Especially since I know something you don’t………….

@hybridlore

Leon!!!! Yes!!!

I’m guessing this means you’re happy with what he did?

lolol

Great section. He must have been really famous…

Oh he was. You see, he was the White Knight, and the White Knight –––––––––––––––––––––––

So yeah, that would explain it.

@savannah_grace2009

haha!

Well thanks for understanding. I’ll try to read it as soon as possible, but I’m not sure when that will be.

and Leon takes the plunge.

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NEXT SECTION!!!

 

“Oh, it is good to be back!” Rolf exclaimed as he reclined with the others about the fire.

“How is your village?” Johannes asked as he leaned forward to stoke the blaze.

“It is doing well. The winter was a hard one and took some of…

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@liberty

 

Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!

YES!

Any thoughts on that?

No, they moved into the University for the winter. I mentioned it at one point, but you may have missed it. 😉

@liberty

I LOVE IT!!!

So excited!

@stephie

absulutly.

It just really matters how you go about saying that. If we are to speak truth and proclaim Jesus, that means we need to discredit false gods. God is not One among many. There is only ONE.

But yeah, it depends on how you go about doing so and if you’re antagonistic about it or do it in a loving and kind way. And again,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

🤣🤣

Also, I’m so sorry I haven’t been reading! Life has been WILD!

@whalekeeper

WOW!! Those are awesome!

I don’t use references really. Unless it’s for outfits……….

@keilah-h

Nice!! I like it!

@linus-smallprint

I’ve been taking a swing at these documents.

Left several comments for you.

@linus-smallprint

Oh, so you did actually make them stay. But you’re zooming through this as well in order not to interfere with the pacing. That works.

Phew, glad it works. XD

I’m glad for this scene. Before I read this section, I was hoping your next section would have something like it. We’ve had many scenes of preaching the gospel, peopl…

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@keilah-h

haha! Nope, no electricity.

It’s a mix. The more advanced kingdoms have a middle-ages feel, while the others are more Roman, old Britania, etc.

@keilah-h

I see, that makes sense. XD

 I’m assuming this means your story’s setting is basically an alternate Europe. Is the Common Tongue an English equivalent or something else?

yeah, just about.

Yes, English.

ohhhhh ok! I like the style, it makes it different than the other two

Good. That’s the goal.

@hybridlore

Yes, I am.

@hybridlore

Yay!!! *dance of victory*

😂😂😂 Talk about a rude awakening!

Lolol.

Well, Leon was hit in the face!!

I’m interested in Leon’s backstory more now. He seems to be hiding something from Julian and the others. It will be interesting to see him go back to where he used to fight.

idk if I’d say hiding it as much as hates to talk abo…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!!!

Imperial Winters are not very exciting, so I’m going to try to cover the whole time in this next section. We’ll see if I can pull it off.

The fifteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 2nd
The Empire

Early this morning, I wa…

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