Jaybird

@linus-smallprint

Hey, I’m afraid I won’t be able to share the full book in one piece. I don’t trust Reedsy and I can’t find any other way unless I’m missing a place where KP lets you attach files.

So, if there are some of (or all of) the questions you can’t answer because of that then that’s okay.

@keilah-h

Thank you so much!

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory trailed behind Leo and the girls, lost in his own whirlwind of thoughts. He finally noticed they had come to a stop and looked up.

They had come to an open door covered with large paper frogs. Inside a chorus of children were working their way through a simple rhyme. A middle-aged woman was…[Read more]

I lost track of what I’ve posted and I don’t feel like going to look. Soooo, hope this isn’t a repeat.

@keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin @ellette-giselle

*Nearly tags myself on accident*

Leo

“Sure.” He smiled down at the girls. Their tails were something to get used to, but he had seen weirder things here.

The hall was long and curved, so that in a few paces they had lost sight of the others. Soon the somber red doors have way to bright yellows…[Read more]

I’m fine with it! Glad someone finally RPd!

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory carefully moved so that his back was to the wall. The amount of people was starting to feel dangerous, especially since Rory could sense mots of them would be handy in a fight. He was still trying to get over the fact that strangers greeted each other…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh girl…that broken violin scene makes me want to go get out my baby and hug it. Like, ugh.

*Strokes violin case*

@freed_and_redeemed

I love it!!! I’m so excited for the next book!! I’m literally going to get my hands on one of the VERY first copies!!!

@esther-c

I used to live there! What time period are you going for? Because I’ve also done a lot of research.

if it’s modern, what do you want to know?

@keilah-h

Okay, I’m thinking I’m gonna keep it.

Yes, but oddly enough, when a God-fearing character dies in a story, I’m not usually as sad as I am at other characters’ deaths cause they’re in heaven (even though they don’t exist lol)

SAME!! I totally know what you’re saying!!

I know!! It is so sad! They would have been such a sweet couple.…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yep sort of. I meant guys dressing as girls, or vise versa. So yeah. It’s gross and called some pretty strong names in the Bible.

XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.

Welp… turns out my characters are going to Italy!!!

I had a totally different plot planned for this story, but after some brainstorming, I’ve come up with a plot that is ten times better!! The only problem is… I’ve never been to Italy…. I’ve been doing some research on customs and culture, but there’s nothing like hearing firsthand experience. H…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh gracious. I remember braces. I drank a lot of soup/broth, and yogurt. Anything that didn’t require teeth.

I don’t have anything to add to that so- *nods* Well put.

Also, Leon you poor baby. I’ll always care for you even if you are as mixed up as a crushed bag of tortilla chips. *Offers a mug of tea and cookies*

@linus-smallprint

Nice. Thank you!

I’ll take a look at that!

@linus-smallprint

I dunno. I just don’t really have any accounts.

Can you delete the Reedsy link? Is it free?

Yup. I do want to think about things before I answer, so I will be taking some time. I also will need to make School assignments, preparing a Sunday School lesson, and work a priority. If I have time, I may start going through…

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@linus-smallprint

I kinda don’t mind that you know all of that from that little end part. But would you as a reader rather not know it?

She may eventually join KP.

AWESOME!! You’ll have to introduce her to me when/if she does. That has to be soooo fun having a sibling who also writes!

Firstly, do you have a Google or Microsoft account?

Uh,…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Fair 😂😂 I just don’t like yogurt 🤪

Also, I know braces hurt, but in the end it will be worth it!! I had braces for two years, but when I got them off,  my smile looked so much better!

Yogurt?? 😖

@linus-smallprint   @keilah-h

Okay, here are the questions I had.

Where the characters believable?

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?

Is there anything that you w…[Read more]