Jaybird

I am loving this new character already 😂

Captain Chris Augusto Taylor could never seem to time his sleep and his schedule properly. A dull buzz beneath his soft, feather pillow jolted him awake. A knock of his head to the wood above, a quiet cuss his Mamma would so hastily wash his mouth out for, and a roll off the simple pallet was enough to make…

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Great topic idea.

Will have to use in the future

@theloonyone Hiiii Loony, and welcome back!! 💖🥳

Happy to see you again. I hope your life is fabulous <3

Now, for the questions…

Favorite thing you have written?

Errr, probably my first novel XD It’s currently in the publishing process, so yes, I have to say it probably has to be my fav🥰😆

Stranded on an island. If you like music, what are five…

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@rae

I’ve never heard of that site, or really any site for cover making. Guess I haven’t been looking. XD

I’ve used Photoshop or Canva to design working covers before, and I’ve been satisfied enough with that (especially Photoshop, but I just like playing with that thing).

If you want tips for making a good cover design, I’d say start by…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad it was helpful! (Am more than mildly curious who this character will be)

Gracious, I don’t like this guy. Or Riker’s father much either. They’re…slimy. *stalks out of room*

@savannah_grace2009 😭😭😭

it’s so good, but…but…but…

😭😭😭

Sef and Riker each need to be rescued fr 😭💖

@savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 Thank y’all very much💖💖🥰

@koshka @esther-c Thank y’all so much for the ideas!! <3

Koshka, I really like your idea of Riker meeting someone much like him, and I know who I’m going to do😏

also, does anyone else just get so infuriated by some characters even if one or two are just so minor…[Read more]

Funnn

*subscribed*

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… maybe you could bring Riker to a point where he starts playing what-if scenarios in his head. Like “What if God does really love me?” “What if I can actually be forgiven?” Etc. to where he eventually starts believing it. I’m sure he’ll fight it at first, but then he just finally…[Read more]

@beth-torres

(I’m finally getting back to you within a few days!! 😱😂)

Ok, awesome!

Hallie

Hallie blinked a few times, the awkwardness of the moment sinking in. Her cheeks burned as she took a step back. “Oh, I guess… Well… um, thanks?” She forced a chuckle. Top hat? She mentally scrambled for something else to say, but nothing came to mind.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh my goodness the poor darlings 😭😭😭 I need to see them happy and healed soon 😭

I loved Leon’s confrontation scene. *hugs him* And Isaiah is so sweet 💖

And Riker 😭😭😭😭😭  *hugs him too*

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.

Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.

• He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
• Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…

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@esther-c @koshka @rae Thank y’all so much for reading and being so kind! 🥰🥰 Oh, and *offers tissues to all*…there we go XD

Honestly, rn the only one who is a struggle is Riker.

I know where Leon’s story is going…I know how Leon will finally come back to God…I know how he will come to the end of himself…

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@stephie

Sooo… I feel really bad because I never was able to read the book 🫣 I really wanted to I just totally forgot/didn’t get the time!! 😭

I have a basic idea of what the book’s about though, so I’m looking forward to reading y’all’s discussions!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hurry up and get to the end when they’re all redeemed alreadyyy!! 😩

Jk jk 😂😂

Great job though, girlie! I loved reading some of your writing again!

@savannah_grace2009

(Sorry it took me forever to get to this!! 😭)

Ooh, I love it!! I really like how you changed it!