Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009

um….. 90% of them I made up…… a few my dad and brothers say…… and the other couple were on a word document of quotes I’ve collected.

Let’s see…..

Most of Evan’s are from the letters of ww2 pilots, the “what are we waiting for” and “I know the other stuff was me” are direct lines from the book.

For Ron, the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.

Gotcha! That makes much more sense. 😀

@savannah_grace2009

Really good! I liked it a lot.

Ok, the only thing is, it seems seems now she as a relationship with The Great One, and wasn’t the last chapter her not even wanting to talk to Him? I’m a little confused at the jump there. Other then that, I loved it!

Aaaand my poor boy. Jack has it rough.

Ok, Ron’s great too! Love my sniper!

Captain Michael!!!! Love this guy!

@rae @grcr @esther-c

Haha, I’m glad y’all like them!! I have a few more I’ll put on here!

@calyhuge

I’m good with it if Sara is!

@ellette-giselle

Love the boards!!

and here’s another.

@grcr

I think the chapter was good! Intriguing.

Thanks! I’m glad!

I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it!

Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical  feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)

The last part was pretty sad to…

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@highscribeofaetherium

I finished up Esther’s drawing. If you have your character picked and ready I’d love to draw it.

@esther-c

Oh I’m so glad!! I wasn’t sure if they turned out the way you were hoping they would. I’m so glad they’re good!

Like literally, Hallie looks so pretty and Easton is practically perfect!!

@ellette-giselle

Ahhh!!! They look so good!! 😍 Thank you thank you thank you!!! 🥰

@esther-c

Hi Esther,

I finished your characters, though I must say that this style is not my forte. I normally draw all my girls in dresses or skirts so this was a little new. I hope you like it. If not, I can try again. 🙂

@esther-c

Ok, here’s the first one.

@savannah_grace2009

So I really want to keep reading your story, and I need to double check—are the chapters you’re sharing on here in the Reedsy link you shared with me? Or is the link an older draft?