Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009

You might not be able to give me world advice, but certainly you can help with other things, like if a paragraph just doesn’t make sense, or a character is going out of their personality, etc.

Plus, what I mostly need right now is to see how readers respond to the story itself. ya know.

I’ll send the next scene if you’re ready!

@savannah_grace2009

ack! i messed up your tag. two messages above for you!

@savannah_grace2009

Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔

Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.

(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)

Aaron is more mature then Turin.

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron…

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Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔

Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.

(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)

Aaron is more mature then Turin.

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s flaws whether…

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@savannah_grace2009 @anyone_else_whos_intereste

                Against All Odds Playlist!!

1.) Jonathan: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_WNDIybIXs

2.) Jack: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwvRaHmn694

3.) Villain: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IskFoAob2wY&list=PL61EA7836AA4687F1&index=6

4.) Main ship: There is none.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

Ok, here’s the next part….. and then things get bad. lol.

Morning dawned, and after breakfast and a time of prayer, the men and boys went off to train with the soldiers.

Turin was a born fighter, and the way of the sword seemed natural and easy to him. Aaron, on the other hand, found sword craft less to…

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Okay, but you clearly said he did have a temper earlier, and @shadow said she liked it.

He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets f…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

@lightoverdarkness6

Howdy Light! I can’t remember if we’ve met, but welcome back!!

I’m excited to see some of your stuff, so tag me if you post anything!

Oh my goodness YOU GUYS!!!

OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???

I would suggest setting this story on Earth. You can still keep the country names, it can just be an alternate reality of Earth where there used to be countries with those names. Your world and ours are…

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@lightoverdarkness6 LIGHHTTTTTTTTTTT *TACKLE HUG* 💖💖💖💖💖

GIRL, GIRL, GIRLLLLLLLL!!!! I’VE MISSED YOU SO MUCHHHHHHH😭😭😭💖💖 I’m SOOOOO happy to hear you’re doing well though!!!!

AND TYYYYYYYYYY. I’M sooooo EXCITED for the release of Freedom’s Fire 🤩🤩🤩

It’s been good. Busy, but good!! Had more time with extended family lately which has been a…[Read more]

@rae

Heyy!

I had to temporarily quit horseback riding and anything to do with physical strain (the doom of an active farm girl teen) because of three tick-borne diseases right after each other. Didn’t help I never had been on antibiotics before so my immune system was not pleased. Oh, and NEVER bite down on Doxycycoline (if I’m spelling that cor…

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@savannah_grace2009

*HUGE HUG* Girl awwww hahaha😝 You’re so sweet❤❤

Yes my life’s been busy too! but instead of actually taking a break from KP and writing…I distract myself with being busy with KP XD not the healthiest thing to do but oh well lol

Oof yess, I’ve done that before too 😅 But girlie if you ever feel the need to step away for a few…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Aww tysm!! Hahaha yes, slowly getting there😴

Oh my goodness I’m so sorry girl 🥺 That sounds so scary!! I’m always here if you ever need anything. My grandparents yesterday were actually just talking about when my uncle had Lyme disease when he was a teenager and the doctors gave him an antibiotic that cured him.

Keep me…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

😂😂

post scenes and break hearts. That’s what I do. And I do it very well, if I do say so myself😝

Oh my gosh girll 😂😂

jkjk

but I do think I break a lot of hearts on here

 

You do🫠 Yes, you do it quite well😂😭 I don’t think my heart is fit to be called a heart anymore after reading Dietrich’s fate…and Finn’s…and J…[Read more]