Jaybird

It also reminds me how God uses the same talents of different people for different purposes. For example, you tend to gravitate towards darker themes (not in a bad way!) and deal with difficult topics that need to be dealt with and seen in the light of God’s love. On the other hand, I tend to focus on the smaller, everyday struggles I personally f…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara….

Girl this is literally so good and I wish I had gotten to it sooner!!!

I can tell you poured your heart into this and can see it on every page. I’m so glad you decided to go on with this. It has already impacted me in little ways in the short time I read it and I know God will use it to imp…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yes, I got it.

Not sure if you got my reply….

@grcr Reference pics for Acheron (tho I just want the cape at the side to be a shoulder cape, so it isn’t very long if you can do that :3)

@grcr Reference pics for Michael

@grcr yay!!

so I’m gonna request you to draw the main main characters from my fantasy idea, Michael and Acheron🤭

Name: Michael

Age: 23

Personality: Determined, brave, stubborn, loyal, tends to have a very calm/relaxed demeanor

Appearance : Curly blonde hair, pale skin, blue eyes, normal male build (not muscled but not skinny either) (will…[Read more]

@grcr would you be willing to draw two characters in the same picture? 🤭

@grcr ahhh whatttt??? 🤩🤩 Girl, I would be HONORED if you drew one of my characters.

the only question is…which one?? 😂

@keilah-h

Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.

Maybe page 14?

I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.

As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.

I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.

@keilah-h

I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.

Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.

lso, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of…

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@savannah_grace2009

Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.

It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.

My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yeah, I did get a feeling he didn’t love what he was doing when he was talking with Cole.

Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!

@hybridlore

It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!

So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job?

I knew he did something with technology and people, and I knew he worked with the government. This didn’t come as a surprise to me at all. It was good.

@hybridlore

GIRL!

How do you do it?!?!

I am so hooked! OH MY WORD! I want this made into a MOVIE!!

Wow! This is so cool. I’m worried about Everett! I hope he makes it out of this one okay. What I wouldn’t give to be in his head as he reads through all those questions!!

AND ALEC!!! Oh my word! This is great!!

@hybridlore

*Scream of pleasure!!!*

@hybridlore

KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. 😑

*indignant sniff*

@hybridlore

“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*

@hybridlore

Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.

Sounds good.

*eyes you suspiciously*

*grins evilly*