Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009

because, Sara, he is clearly evil. I never like the badguys, and the misunderstood villains are the LITERAL WORST so that better not be what he is. Whatever sad background he might have, that is NO excuse for him being evil, which he clearly is.

@savannah_grace2009

Awwwwww!!! So sweet! Super cute.

Only critique would be this line.

looking at her mahnith one last time, before leaving her mahnith

It’s a little repetitive. Otherwise, I love it!

Also, how old are the kids now?

@savannah_grace2009

yeah, go ahead and call backup. You’re gonna need it.

@highscribeofaetherium

High five!

This looks interesting. what is it? can I join y’all?

@savannah_grace2009

EVERYBODY LOVES HANS <3

I don’t think so.

@stephie

I was looking forward to reading this book, but our library doesn’t have it!! Hopefully I can participate in the next book we read together!

@highscribeofaetherium

Ok, whatever. I guess I’ll just try to deal wh=ith it. It’s been doing since I started being on here.

@savannah_grace2009

I can say what I like, thank you very much. It is America after all.

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009

Next section!!

It was nearly dark when the two rose to head back to the house. Turin laid a hand on Aaron’s shoulder. “Aaron, I am sorry,” he said.

“What for?” asked Aaron.

“For the way I have treated you and encouraged Sabina to treat you. We were both wrong, and I am most to blame,” s…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Finally!!!! lol. Ok, I’ll get to it! Interesting character.

Btw, does this happen to anyone else. At random times I go to reply to something, write the whole reply, submit it, and this shows up. Then Kingdom Pen eats my reply and I have to start it all over again. Is this a problem on my end? I usually have to give it about 5 minutes before it goes away, but it’s still super annoying to have it eating all…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

OH MY GOODNESS that’s awesome!!!! (If it’s anything like my first book you are not going to believe it even when the book is in your hand!) You have to let me know the minute it’s for sale. Any idea on price range? I’m setting aside a twenty at the moment, cause I’m guessing it’ll range somewhere around there?
Oh man, I got…[Read more]

@theshadow

Right-o. Fixing that.

@linus-smallprint

Ok, yeah. I can definitely give a little bit more of an overview of the world in the beginning. Thanks for the tip.

@freed_and_redeemed

Finnnnn!!! 😭❤️

And Hansss!! 👀😭

And this one is mostly for myself and @rae

@koshka @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @ellette-giselle @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol

…

Hans’ aesthetic🖤

I’m crying again. Ugghhhhhhhgghhghhhghghghghhg

I miss Fin so much

😭😭😭

@esther-c I’m so happy y’all have been here for the journey💖 @grcr TYSM!!! And yay, another vote for Fin!! ✨✨ @koshka All authors do it, thank you😂😂 jkjk, they really are poor babies XD And good thing I’m working on Fin’s aesthetic anyhow XD @savannah_grace2009

Here’s Fin’s aesthetic!!!

(totally didn’t tear up making this one…I miss him,…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Gracious, those poor dear charies, put through so much trauma by their author. XD

I vote Fin!

@savannah_grace2009

I think either of us can RP because Calyhuge did write a RP introducing the characters that are about to come interrupt ours. Do you want to? Or should I?

@freed_and_redeemed

I’m so glad that all of here have been able to support and encourage you on your writing journey!! 🤗

@grcr

Yesss, another vote for Fin!

@esther-c GIRL 😭🥹💖💖 Ty so muchhhhhh. It’s so encouraging to see so many ppl so excited💖 I love y’all so muchhhhh!!! *hugs*

Ty, ty!!

Ooh, that’s one vote for Fin👀