Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009

well right now I can’t even DISlike him because I keep forgetting he exists!

Does he get Cassian killed? If he does I’ll throttle him.

@savannah_grace2009

lol, you can can you?

@keilah-h @anyone-else

Does anyone know what she looks like as a dragon?

@savannah_grace2009

Good. I’m glad.

Any idea what’s going to happen now? lol.

@savannah_grace200

(poor Eloy, everybody hates him :/)

That’s because we’ve seen just about nothing of him! If we knew him better we might like him. Right now I keep forgetting that he even exists.

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I would love thoughts about what he did and also what that reveals of his character. In the original draft some friends mentioned he lost a lot of his fighting spirit after he became a Christian and also wasn’t as rash. It should be tempered but not destroyed. Ya know. Idk, what do you think about him invoking…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Did you read the newest one I posted? The one with Turin?

@linus-smallprint

here ya go.

Aaron couldn’t breathe. He braced himself, knowing full well that there was nothing he could do. Is this really how it ends? He wondered.

“Wait! He’s not a spy!” yelled Turin. “I swear it by the standing stone!”

Everyone froze, and in the silence that followed the sound of the trickling fountain was deafening.…

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@linus-smallprint

Ha!! LOVE IT!!!!

Standing there and watching like everyone else. She’s not the main point of this scene.

Want the next one?

@linus-smallprint

Awesome!

Sooooo, if you picked up this book would you read it? (It’s okey if you wouldn’t. I’m just trying to gauge my potential audience for this one.)

@linus-smallprint  @anyone_else_who_has_an_opinion.

What do you think of this? Does this grab your attention a little more?

@keilah-h

Sounds good to me! (I mean, I would be fine with the deadline being tomorrow, but I don’t think the others would like that. lol.)

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, they are older then I thought. Except for Cassian. I would suggest making that a little clearer in the book. I lost track of their ages when it started time changing really fast. I think now that we seen settled into the timeline we are sticking with, I would reinstate all their ages.

Everyone loves Cassian…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Cool! I don’t see anything for December. There seems to be a very large gap….. so are we just repeating the December list?

@grcr

Here’s the next scene……

Jonathan gasped, partly shocked by the loud noise as the shot shattered the stillness, partly because he had felt…nothing.

Jonathan slowly dared to open his eyes. He caught a glimpse of 472 backing away toward his car, his gun still trained on Jonathan. The young soldier moved to the driver-side door a…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you! Someone finally put what I was trying to say into words! (Good words I mean. lol.) I guess “hate” was too strong of a word. I’m not going to go trying to justify his actions or be the “villain lover” because he’s a “bad boy” and that’s cool. I will dislike him and hate his actions, but I agree 100% with what you’re…[Read more]