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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yes he is! He’s a complicated character. I have another interaction between him and Jonathan if you would like to read it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Will do! Thanks!
Nice, I’m glad the temper adds more. I didn’t have it much in the first draft, but I took the risk and strengthened it a little more. Glad it payed off.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Here’s the next part.
Aaron woke to Turin’s boot nudging him. “Up stranger, it’s morning.”
Aaron rubbed his eyes and sat up slowly. “You can call me Aaron.”
“I’ll call you what I like,” replied Turin. “Now get up.”
Aaron began pulling on his boots, and Turin watched him until he was satisfied Aaron was really getting up. Then, he turned a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you for catching that!
Ok, yeah I’ll shorten it up a little.
What do you think of the characters so far? (Just out of curiosity.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Yep. Also, do you want another b&w like Eldred? If not, then do you want the dress red and dark blue like the picture?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Fateful Night
Here’s a picture.

I know! Me neither! This is going to be fun!
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freedom's profile was updated 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I have a new Character board for anyone who’s interested! This is Jim, my robber fella! (Who really, honestly, truly, honest-to-goodness, does NOT like Jonathan. At all. Never ever. Thought hasn’t even crossed his mind. So there.)

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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you! 💖 And I’m soooo looking forward to it!! ✨✨
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Reference #2

(OH, and you can include an earring like the one above in this image too if you would like as well)
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Reference #1
Dress on the right (blue), but pink and more just solid color without any dots

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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love the beard!! You did a great job! ✨✨
Sure, I can send a request in! I’ll have you draw a female character this time, but maybe still in black and white. I just love it so much😂 and then they’ll all be a common theme of black and white, so😉🥰
Name: Aadelheide Mary Wagner
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Clothing: Pink 1940s era…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Go for it!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Because one thing I want to show, especially through Riker and definitely especially through Leon, is that when you become a Christian and accept Christ, accept God, accept everything that comes with being a Christian, that doesn’t mean you’re just going to miraculously be healed of everything you’ve been through
I know people that still have to…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Maybe Leon and Riker (prob esp Leon) while in the USA have both been avoiding people, places, things, etc. that trigger their PTSD, but with the return to Germany it brings a lot of things back and they both have to work through those things that yeah, haven’t healed yet
But both of my Boys are stubborn and don’t like to admit where they’re…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I really do understand what you mean about external conflict though
Def the 1st book had the conflict with all of the war things, all of the antagonists, resistance, etc
The 2nd book has external conflict mostly involving tension between people, alcoholism (for Leon), fights, acted upon hatred, etc
Like how in the second book,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @rae @thearcaneaxiom @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @anyoneelseiforgot
btw, If anyone would be willing, I have a WIP for a 5th draft that I am trying to wrap up for publishing. I would love some f…[Read more]
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