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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh, they are older then I thought. Except for Cassian. I would suggest making that a little clearer in the book. I lost track of their ages when it started time changing really fast. I think now that we seen settled into the timeline we are sticking with, I would reinstate all their ages.
Everyone loves Cassian…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Cool! I don’t see anything for December. There seems to be a very large gap….. so are we just repeating the December list?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Here’s the next scene……
Jonathan gasped, partly shocked by the loud noise as the shot shattered the stillness, partly because he had felt…nothing.
Jonathan slowly dared to open his eyes. He caught a glimpse of 472 backing away toward his car, his gun still trained on Jonathan. The young soldier moved to the driver-side door a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Thank you! Someone finally put what I was trying to say into words! (Good words I mean. lol.) I guess “hate” was too strong of a word. I’m not going to go trying to justify his actions or be the “villain lover” because he’s a “bad boy” and that’s cool. I will dislike him and hate his actions, but I agree 100% with what you’re…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 Pinterest account is back up; y’all should be able to see it now😁
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I’ll be let back in as soon as they allow me back in😅 idk when that will be
and I totally understand. I’m glad y’all like Hans; I’m glad he’s not just a villain everyone loves to hate, bc I don’t feel that way about him at all💖 I see him as human, sinful, and nothing less. He’s no further gone than Leon or Riker…bc no sin…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Hans is just evil, lol. Send him to the character chopping block.
I mean……fair enough. XXD@rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Ok, finally read through everything that was said.
Let’s calm down a little bit😂😂
Let’s get something straight: I don’t love Hans either. The man is evil beyond a doubt (as all…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
TY girl!!!! 💖💖💖💖 It’ll probably be $14.99! It’s at least 300+ pages, so I didn’t think 14.99 was at all outrageous. And Fin is absolutely amazing. I see him as possibly being a fan favorite, along with Isaiah🥰
Aaaaaaand I hate Hans already.
😂😂 It’s ok. You don’t have to love Hans. I wouldn’t say I love Hans, but I don’t hate h…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle @rae I love seeing y’all fight over Hans😂😂 And I’m the author, I know how evil he is, but I wouldn’t say I hate him like I once did. The man is truly broken, and you may not believe me, but he’s an amazing family man and loves his wife and sons dearly🥹💖 he’s someone that you can see both the good and evil…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Stubborn, quick to anger, very passionate and protective…to a fault.
Obviously.
no this is really funny though, because I’m the same way.
OK, this is when you and I have been arguing this whole time and then find out we’re cousins. haha!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009
Annnnnd the next scene!
The next morning, Aaron and Turin got up early. After breakfast began their walk to the village. Turin told Sabina to come with them, saying it was to keep her safe. Secretly he hoped she would believe when she heard Aaron speak.
When the three arrived, Aaron found…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Ah, thank you for that.
as for what just happened…… it was just some innocent girl chatter that I’m afraid you wouldn’t understand. *blinks sweetly and puts on innocent face*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh goodness. This is getting out of hand. lol.
Ok, I am not saying that if Hans was a person I would hate him. I’m just saying that the role as the villain that he has is not one that I find myself liking. Does that make sense?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Lolol. Yeah, we have a good stream of German in us. Our family were royals in Ulm. My last name is very German. We have some Jewish, Irish, a little Italian and dutch, and some Cherokee Indian. But the strongest vain is by far German. I get my complexion from the Germans. Very fair skin, pale blue eyes and very blond…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Watch out yourself, the 1/3 German is going to fight back, with some Irish rebel highlander and Jewish spunk.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
For the sake of the other poor innocent KPers who are also interested in my writing, I’ll back off.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Is that a threat? Do that and I will give you the climax chapter and then wait FIVE MONTHS to post the rest. So there. I can play this game too ya’ know.
Ok, give me a second. or two. or three. or fifty. I have to check it over for super bad edit mistakes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Oooo, you care about him already!!! That’s AWESOME!!!
Hmm, I think I’ll wait a day or two to post the next scene……….
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