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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Okay, now I have some for The Veil of Night. So, there are a lot more, but I don’t believe all of these will actually make it into the book. I already scrapped ten of them, and I feel like some more will end up going. (I had 45 for LTBL, but as you can see, only like 16 a…[Read more]

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

@hybridlore

YAHOOO!!!!!!

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

@hybridlore

Yes, I can!

It’s pretty cool!

So, you read LTBL, right?

Do you feel like I’m missing any important scenes? Are you disappointed that i didn’t draw something? etc.

Also, which one(s) are your favorite?

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

@linus-smallprint

Oh, do you feel like I missed anything important that you would have wanted drawn?

Jaybird

@elishavet-pidyon

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