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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Ok. I am in the middle of section 2. I’ll go back and finish it. I’m just so… amazed.
WHY would ANYONE in his right mind Say That? XD I’m sorry, it’s just something I remember from a visiting missionary. You rarely if ever start off saying “the gods are false.” Telling people everything they believe is a lie will typically…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ooo, lies. XD if I remember right, they want to start with little lies (because they’re more believable) and then work toward bigger lies with more power. So here are some ideas for chains of lies.
“You should be able to be strong enough on your own” (so when you falter, “you must be a failure” can follow)
“If God loved you,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper (Do you like sugar or cream with that?)
Thank ya’ll so much! I am enjoying using a simpler, more whimsical style than I use with graphite. Watercolor is just… fairytale-esc.
And shading with watercolor is finally starting to make sense. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @ifyouknowAlwin @anyone
Ok… You know that one character? The one who is disturbingly realistic? If I make a thread sometime later this month about handling dark topics in a God glorifying way, this is why.
Meet Letice, Alwin’s mother. I love her, but I heard her story years ago and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
I like him! He looks like a good friend to have in hard times.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oooo, a scene….
Leo does have a point. At least fighting the Nazis gives him an idea of purpose. Poor kiddo.
Poor Riker though. I’m rather proud of him. Leo definitely struggles to see the hurt in other people.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
The bois!!!! Yay!! It’s been a while. Their story is so fascinating/emotional/fantastic.
*realizes they’re up for adoption*
I’ll adopt Wolfgang. Or Leo. Or….
Or… Can I be the little aunt who makes them cookies when they feel down? XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@koshka @peopleinterested @whoever
I’m playing with watercolor again! My favorite twin sister got me SpArkLY wAtErcOloRs. I am infatuated.
Anyway, this is Sypher, the character Koshka just put in the School RP.

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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m good with it being morning!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I struggle with finishing too! (Or getting anywhere beyond Chapter 3 before I subside to excessive world building….)
I have found that writing out my thoughts for the scene no matter what they sound like does help me get something to work with. I can trash it later, but I will probably have a scene “frame” solidified. (Is that a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Aw. (I forgot everyone can use Ink) That’s really cute. I would have been so happy if some of my childhood doodles came to life like that.Â
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin Benny is a fun character! Did Lois draw him?
Viktor (Library)
“Yes, kind of new. This year is my first.” He sat down in his chair again. The upholstery was still warm from where he’d curled up in it earlier. He settled back into the cozy spot.
The Hugo boy looked like he had attended the school much longer, or at least he…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@loopylin Ack! I did see it, but Sir Gawain was having my Brot Lit homework in my face, and Robert Burns almost burnt the sticky toffee pudding. I have returned now though, since I have some Quiz stuff to put off doing for another hour.
@whalekeeper Mm hmm. 👀 This does actually happen in the story, but she can’t hit him then because he’s feverish…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
First off, those two memes are painfully hilarious. XD Thank you for blessing this place with them. XD
Now.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
Yay! My quirky mental imagery has been deeply complemented. XD
I want them to be like the Silent Warriors in Aerethtrae, but more mystical. If that makes sense. XD Like Tolkien’s Valar or d…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Reúven & Liora (School Grounds)
It was almost dark as night before the school lit their way with it’s enthusiasm for lights. Liora followed Reúven up the front steps a little closer than she would have normally.
“You know, we would have been in so much trouble if we were out after dark a few years ago.”
“A few years ago?” He held the door o…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
*Pops out of nowhere*
By the way, I don’t know your friend, but I’m gonna guess she would love your questions. We usually like sharing, even if we’re shy about it sometimes. And if your bestie doesn’t know exactly, getting your questions may be a great place for her to find the “why” for herself.
Or you can ask on here like you…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
It’s okay! I’ll actually be really busy tomorrow as well. (Homework+ Burn’s Night preparations)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Aha!
By the way, Loopy, I’m not strong either, but I’m too stubborn to get a cart for bags of dogfood. You can do it, Loopy. Be stubborn!!!
Viktor (Library)
one of these days I’m going to use his actual name and not catch it. And there will be confusion. 😬“What?” Viktor rose too quickly and smacked his head on the side…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m game!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Aha! *subscribing*
A blurb would be good! Then of course a good intro to the Main Characters, because I really liked their aesthetics and want to know what they have to say for themselves.
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