Elfwing

@loopylin

Thanks! That’s what I was going for with him! Thank you so much for your input!

Do i have a good snse of movement? is it clear what he’s doing?

Also, here is a drawing of another of my elf oc’s, that is an homage to one I made about nine to ten years ago who was basically cardboard in terms of depth, and the black hair was natural versus this one who dyed his hair at one point lol.

Also, is my design recognizable and clear?

Ok so you have to make sure your drawing/photo is 900×900 pixels tops if you wanna post a jpg on here

Hopefully posting this works lol…

So, what are your impressions of this character (temporarily named Deerfoot) visually without reading the text (personality, his role in the story, anything else?) and, possibly, if you can think of a good name for him? (I was thinking Conri, an old irish name meaning ‘king of hounds’)

(Nameberry and B…[Read more]

@jonas Yeah, a small one, so I can see how it’d happen.

The weird thing is that the Anaxes asteroids apparently kept their planet’s atmosphere? IDK, it’s sci-fi so I suppose that could happen. @thearcaneaxiom‘s Omialia makes a bit more sense since the asteroids are clumped together like a planet, held together by gravity, rather than being a…[Read more]

@rae yeah pretty much. Or just a random word.

@esther-c I’m always late to this XD

Tech

“Yep.” Ev affirmed. “Are you planning to come?”

Tech stopped in his tracks.

Rivet’s face flashed through his mind, but he pushed the image away. “I don’t know…..I am only twelve, and a date should be the furthest thing from my mind according to my older siblings.” he confessed, a bit embarrassed by…[Read more]

@jonas Fair point. Those are normal names, but they’re at least a little fantasy-sounding.

Snake’s Japanese name (since he came from a series of video games, and you know how the Japanese love video games), スネーク or “Sunēku” (google translated that lol) is kinda cool and fantasy-sounding, but since he appears basically Western and not Asian, I…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.

There’s a planet in Star Wars called Anaxes that got destroyed by something (it never says what) and ends up being an asteroid belt kinda like that.

@thearcaneaxiom I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)

Also, I love how you deliberately misspelled Bucky’s name since she’s unfamiliar with it. What does she think of his metal arm?

@smiley Aww, that’s so horrible, poor girl!

@freedomwriter76 Steve, you’re like 6 foot 2 and 240 pounds of pure muscle, you could fight Dreykov and win if you wanted to!

JK….Dreykov really is the worst if he can terrify Captain America himself into doing his bidding…..

@jonas yeahhhh I think staring over would kill it

oh, and it’s so funny how all the other charries have these weird fantasy names and then there’s just “Snake” and “Rocky” lol

@beth-torres Snake can swim….in freezing water, too….

That’s ok! Looking forward to seeing more!

also, I’d love to see more of your world!

@rae

This chapter really hooked me! I’d love to see where it goes! What themes/messages are you pursuing?

I critiqued the chapter, feel free to read or ignore if you want, I forgot to ask you before writing my opinions. If you choose to read, bear in mind that these are my opinions, and they are far from professional as well as unwarranted…[Read more]

It’ll be a while. The original was mostly grays, I’m planning to color my rendition of it

@jonas awesome

I’ll show you that comic once I’m done with it….

@rae @jonas nooo this rp must not die, I’m having way too much fun roleplaying with Snake lol

I’m currently tracing a little comic strip I found of him and his girlfriend (well, wife at the point where you guys are seeing him lol) just goofing off. (since he’s not my charrie by default I can go looking for other people’s fan art and modify it to…[Read more]