Elfwing

@freedomwriter76 cool!

I’ve only done a character lying down once, and it was significantly, ah, sadder circumstances than yours lol.

@freedomwriter76 nice!!!! That is pretty good!

@jonas all righty! I’ll be back with a Snake RP in a couple of minutes.

I have a custom-built Lego minifigure of him chilling on my computer right now lol. Fully human, not dragon (he wasn’t a dragon in the universe I pulled him from), but still.

@jonas wdym???

like we won’t get the that point yet or we abandoned that storyline completely?

@calyhuge whaaaa

Wild Kratts actually existed???

JK, I tend to forget that the TV shows I loved when I was younger and then abandoned actually were real shows and not cobbled-together memories.

My favorite episode was the one with the cheetah racers……

and who in their right mind thinks the Revolution was a mistake??? If you traveled…[Read more]

@calyhuge Astronomy sounds too much like Tech lol

Right now he’s in the middle of Ev and Fallon’s awkward conversation, so he doesn’t have much to offer, but if they met he’d probably go yakking off

I could see him looking to her like he does his older sister, Emerie.

@rae

I see… I would recommend thinking of a theme/topic to intertwine each story into and have the ending be a culmination of that theme/topic to communicate your message in the character’s actions and choices, and how they’re rewarded/punished. E.g. Star Wars (I block quoted it for spoilers, if you haven’t seen them yet and spoilers bother…[Read more]

@rae

Ok that helps me understand the overall story better, so you’re basically going for something very similar to Star Wars (before Disney got a chokehold on it 😭) but with a Christian worldview writing it, and probably some of Joseph’s story from Genesis thrown in.

I recommend Odd 1s Out’s video on pitching a show to help when explaining to…[Read more]

https://storyembers.org/groups/sci-fi-writers/forum/topic/sci-fi-short-story/

Here’s a new-ish version, this is probably going to be more readable lol. (I’m still not satisfied with it, but this is how it looked when posting on Story Embers when the forum was still active, and I’m less embarrassed about it lol, even if I’m still not happy with…[Read more]

OK THAT IS OLDER THAN I THOUGHT IT WAS! You really don’t have to read it unless you want writing I cringe to read even the first sentence lol. (Forgot I had a period I really wasn’t posting on KP because I wasn’t really a teen anymore, I’m a Story Embers refugee)

(Changes I made: Main character’s name is now Jake, Fabian’s speech issues are more…[Read more]

Another revision of Ice

This is the WIP I was mentioning, it has some problems, and I’m far from even 75% satisfied with how it turned out lol, but this is sorta a sample of something from about three years ago.

@rae

That’s OK! It’s a week before Christmas, and I think everyone’s juggling a lot more than normal right now! Also, I’ve only read the first half of the chapter as of yet, as I’ve had several other things I’m working on. But I do intend to read the rest of it!

You have certainly not failed as a writer, you have an early draft that just needs…[Read more]

@jonas I won’t be able to RP for a few days, but what if the forest dragon shows up?

I don’t have time for an RP until Wednesday or Thursday though.

@calyhuge hehe several thousand pounds of freezing scale and muscle coming through!

seriously though I added him because I thought we’d be fighting mostly dragons, where he’d be equally matched. But since the human enemies appeared, he’s become among the more powerful characters in the rp…..

sorry for basically relegating him to a Larry S…[Read more]

@Rae

I’m so sorry that this took so long! I hope it helps!

“Nahim. Nahim!”
Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old [this is shown when Nahim thinks about how long ago the accident was] friend’s hidden face. “Nahim, what’s up?”
[how does Nahim react to Mandin waving his hand in front of his face? does he tell him to stop? does…[Read more]

@Rae

I’m so sorry giving you my thoughts on Ch 2 is taking so long, I’m kinda busy with the holidays lol and it’s been taking me a while.

@jonas yep! Tech is actually a descendant of Snake. He’s also the charrie on my profile pic (if you couldn’t tell by his name being there lol)

@everyone

Tech

He awoke on a hard floor.

Certainly not the one in the Imperial facility.

Not in the Marauder or on the island either.

Where was this?

He stood up, bionic parts whirring softly as his digital eyes tried to scan the area for him.

 Planet unknown, the words read, tiny in the corner of his vision. Size: average, as evidenced b…[Read more]

@everybody here

Here’s a video I found which I think explains all of us in musical form….. Leroy Anderson’s piece “Typewriter”, literally written for a typewriter.