Elfwing

@jonas I know, I want to RP but I’ve been sick since the day after Christmas, so….Haven’t had much time or energy for it

@savannah_grace2009

I did read Marcurious’s intro, and it was pretty interesting!

I’ll check it out!

@rae

Interesting! How can you foreshadow Grathmere before this point perhaps? does Alpha have powers that are similar that Nahim makes him hide?

The scene is to be written like a horror, if you will, with the reader feeling dread and fear. I’m not good enough to write that way rn. Especially since I don’t read horror. This is actually the onl…

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@savannah_grace2009

I’m so flattered you value my opinion!

I might be able to help a little, but I am a hobby writer so I can’t guarantee how often I’m able to critique/post, but I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps. I wish I could guarantee you help, but I might have plans…[Read more]

@rae

I’ll make a full reply later since I’m angry at myself rn, and when I get angry, most ppl think it’s at them. Same with disappointment.

It’s ok, I totally get it! And don’t be angry at yourself, we’ve all had those moments. Sometimes I get really frustrated with whatever I’m doing and get super mad at my story and self for it not being what…[Read more]

I’ll try later lol

Oops it’s not working lol. so sorry about that!

Retry:

Also, here’s a drawing of my characters! ( thought you might like to see)

Top 5 Myths to Avoid When Writing about Grief

Here’s another one, I hope these help! (they’re what I can find lol)

Three Ways to Use Subtext to “Show, Don’t Tell”

this one may help, I’ll go look for some others, I can’t find the old stuff 😪

@rae

Hi! I finally finished the critique!

Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.

Nahim walked away from where he had left Mandin, the Ward in the annual meeting at the close of this festive day. He was invited by…[Read more]

@grcr yeah, I remember her from the books.

oh, and on your signature, the “did the sun come up in the west?” sounds like something me and my brother’s character Goose would say. He has immense power over basically anything he wants but is super clueless about it…..

@rae

cool

Like Anakin Skywalker’s, or Echo’s except with a hand instead of a plugin thing?

(sorry for replying so late)

@freedomwriter76 thanks!!

@jonas I know!!

That and Shrek. (at least I’ve seen a lot of memes and stuff involving that)

It’s so weird, right?

@jonas lol I don’t have a problem with the idea, it was just funny to me that it was like that

@rae don’t know if I got to comment on that drawing. She looks cool!