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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
Those poems you wrote are amazing!! I would share some of mine, but I have them all saved to my moms computer which we packed away. I like to write about nature, people and basically everything! My most recent poem was for my neighbors, when they moved I gave it to them and they cried. It was all about how much of an impact…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
No, you didn’t do wrong, you can write as much as you’d like! 🙂
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
Sometimes I write prayers as poems/songs:
Thank You Lord that I’m no longer
lost as to my future
or hopeless as to my past.
the pain, terrors, fears and failures I thought would last
instead have melted away
in the light of the rays
of Your wondrous grace
and mercies new with the dawn.
Or little devotional thoughts:
When in the…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
(@acancello Fun idea!)
As I watched this girl, I wondered what her secret was. There she was walking through the park in front of my house while I watched from my front porch. She seemed on a mission. She had a purpose in her steps. A smile gently curled the edges of her mouth as she thought about it. I stood up slowly, wondering if I could…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
I write poetry! And songs, which are basically poems with a melody.
Actually, the next part in Little One’s Journey will involve one of my poems, sort of like how J.R.R.Tolkien puts songs and things in the Hobbit and LOTR and also how Hannah Hurnard puts songs and poems in Hind’s Feet on High Places.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@kyronthearcanin @acancello @esther-c
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Allison started the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkeness6
I was just wondering if anyone on KP still write poetry and/or haiku’s? I was wondering if you wanted to talk about them, share them and critique them for each other! Just let me know!
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Allison started the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @kyrothearcain @janellebelovedpig @landric @booksbyjayna @euodia-vision @everyone who wants to join!
I made up a fun game that we all can play! So its crazy easy… Step one, im going to post a sentence, paragraph, huge piece etc of unfinished work. Then one of you are going to add the next piece…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 3 years ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Thank you all for the prayers! The move has been going great! We leave in 5 days! Saying goodbye to everyone has been hard, but better because I know I will see them again. I just wanted to let you all know that I will be on…[Read more] -
Allison replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
And here’s part 3:
All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.
As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in
Part 2 is out now! Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Part 2!
All through supper Little One tried to focus on her siblings’ conversation. She tried to be normal, but her Bag of Entertained Thoughts felt so heavy, she kept figeting with it. If anyone noticed, no one seemed bothered.
That night Little One could hardly sleep, haunted by images of Undiscerned at work stoking and bellowing the burning…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Wow! I’m on the edge of my seat! Nicely done, Solfyre!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Awh, y’all are so awesome! Thank you. That makes my day. I’m excited to keep sharing it with you!
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Allison replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
I really like it! I really like the characters names and how they do seem real. I dont see any mistakes or anything wrong with it. (Reading on here is fine, I dont think you need a google doc. Are you posting more? 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
@awesumfaith
Thanks! I really like your also!
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Allison replied to the topic Writing Prompts and writers block busters! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I dont think I have tried that yet, but that sounds super fun to do!! Ill try that soon!
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
@esther-c
@freedomwriter76
@acancello
@kyronthearcaninHave you ever made a fanfic off of the Bible? (Or, I guess it would be more historical fiction.) I haven’t, but I think doing the research of digging into the Word would be super cool!
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I have, actually, kind of just for fun. It was roughly 1500 words because I was entering it in a contest thingy. I called it Two-hundred and Seventy-Six because it was from one of the crew member’s perspectives in the story where Euroclydon smashed Paul’s ship to Rome, and yet they all survived. The sailor I used for an MP was pretty skeptical the…[Read more]
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I have so many ideas for Biblical fiction!! 😂 Someday, I’d love to actually write it. XD
I’d love to write about: Simon Peter, Rhoda, one of Jesus’ siblings, and Esther.
Obviously, that would take a lot of work, so I haven’t expanded upon it. (The most I did was make a moodboard for Simon Peter. 😁)-
And I have more ideas that I can’t remember right now. XD
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You’re so welcome!! Aw, that’s great!! Okay sister! I’ll continue to pray for you and your family. No worries girl! I probably won’t be on much this week either. Talk to you then! ❤
I’m glad it’s going well! I hope you have a blessed week!
You’re so welcome!! I’m so glad everything’s going well for y’all! 😀 I’ll continue to keep you in my prayers! ❤️
Praying hard for you!! I know this is difficult, but you know the Author of your story. Keep us updated! ❤️