@elanor
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 weeks ago
Joseph or Jesus?
Arrested in the garden
Working for the King
My brother has sold me
The rest are sleepingAbandoned in this cell
God’s will be done
He can take evil
And turn it to goodWhile dreams
Keep me awake
I was meant to rule
Is this the way?
Dreams
to be restored
to the glory I laid asideFavorable dream
In Three days restored
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 weeks ago
Eve
I’m an outcast
By the choices I’ve made
I thought it’d be cool
I thought I’d be great
Yeah, I’m an outcast
Guarded away
From the garden where I spent my best days
Now I’m living in pain
Giving birth in the rain
To Cain
And Able
Cursed is the ground
Changing all that’s around
Thorns and sharp teeth on animals
I thought it’d…
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Janellebelovedpig and Ellette Giselle are now friends 4 months ago
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Allison replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
You read all those?!?!?
Pretty much all that came through 😀
That’s okay! Please, please, let me know when you get it published!
Dont worry! Ill let everyone know (:
I get it if you’re not comfortable sharing this, but would you mind if either I gave you my email or you gave me yours so we can talk sometimes? Again, no pres…
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Hi!! Ive missed you!!
Ah, that’s ok! As long as you’re happy. Forensic science is cool! What makes you kinda want to do that?
So I toured a high school and they had a forensic science booth, I told my Mom I thought it was super cool and shes going to buy the curriculum for it next year (I dont want to go to public high school yet XD) The…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Awww sad day :/ that’s okay though! You do whatever you feel is best for you, and what God is calling you too! I have missed you so much 💗💗💗💗💗💗 and I will continue to miss you!!!
❤️ ❤️ ❤️
And sorry for blowing up your email with always tagging you xD I just really missed you! I promise I won’t anymore if you don’t want me to lo…
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @anyone
Hi guys!! Man, it’s been a long time since I’ve been on here 🙂 But yeah, lifes been… different? How are you doing? How’s your WIP’s?
About the Pinterest board, well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?). I was really thinking about it a few months ago and real…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig and Kylie are now friends 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Kylie, I LOVE it!! 🤗
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Awh, thanks @ava-blue! The Lord is my inspiration. He gives so much and then still gives that I can praise Him!
I wrote the following poem for selling to a publisher and had to give over the copyright and agree to not post it on anything of mine. Since they declined my submission, y’all get to enjoy the poem now for free! It’s based off of a fall…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Here we go!! Chapter TWO
sorry if the formatting turned outgoofyIt was a good day. Little One cheerily stepped along the path out to her garden. She hadn’t been in several weeks, not since getting Undiscerned’s letter. But a thrill beat in her heart to be back.
She had been to the Sanctuary everyday. The most wonderful place.
“…Psalmic…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @felicity @starshiness @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in-welcome-to-chime-in @do-you-even-remember-this-2-year-old-WIP? 🤭
Howdy! Little by little I’ve gotten the 2nd “chapter” done. Please let me know if it changes tone too much. I’m afraid that this second one doesn’t have the same…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 6 months, 3 weeks ago
The Eternal Wedding Feast
The Creator of our great world
Who made Paradise in 7,
Takes 9 months to knit His image
And takes centuries on heaven.
He’s prepared a place before us
While we remain with all our foes.
He’s coming back to reign victoriously
Coming back to take us home.
Can you imagine all the grandeur?
It’s far beyond…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Even if that is the only fruit the Lord ever brings from my poems, all my rhymes are worthwhile for the rest of my life. 🥰 You’re the reason I write and your comment made my day!🥲
Beloved by GodÂ
O the lonely hill
The slow hard trudge up
To the top of Calvary
Where Jesus bled,
His heart stopped,
Where my Lord died for me.He…
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Ok, thanks! I may check out Instagram, but I have to see 🙂
🥹 Thats so sweet💖 I dont know how you make all your scenes so realistic, like, I can just see it happening.🥰
Well, just to clarify, the excited part was about you almost being ready to be published. 😉 I mean, driving’s exciting t…
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey! I have a question for anyone. The social media platform I use currently changed their policies and now I cant post. Do you guys have any other suggestions for a new platform. Is Instagram any good? Thanks!
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Allison's profile was updated 8 months, 2 weeks ago
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Heyy, I’m glad to see you again! That’s super exciting about your novel!
Thanks!
Oh, that sounds fun! Do you like far away from where you used to?
Yeah, we’re about 3,000 miles away XD, I’m from California and now in NC.
I’m not super great. My brothers and I have had this nasty sickness all week. We seriously had fevers…
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
This week I shall be reviewing several edited chapters…. BECAUSE AMAZON HAS OFFICIALLY EDITED ALL 37 CHAPTERS OF FREEDOM’S FIRE!!!
Thats AMAZING!!!!! I’m so happy for you thats soooo exciting!!!
And thanks for the welcome!❤️
HHHEEEYYY!!! 😃😃😃 Good to see you back!! I’ve missed you a whole ton!!
Hi!! Thank you! You guys w…[Read more]
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Allison and freedom are now friends 8 months, 2 weeks ago
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