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@hallie-jean Ey, that looks awesome!

@jodi-maile Hi there, welcome to the Kingdom! I’m Linyang, and it’s really nice to meet you! I write mainly crime, fantasy, slice of life or all three! I’ve never heard of the Chronicles of Prydain before! They sound quite interesting. I’m also currently homeschooled! I think most of us here are, haha…

Some questions!

1. What are some of your…[Read more]

@hallie-jean Good luck!

@scripter-of-kingdoms Nah, I’m actually really, really, busy, I was just procrastinating because I didn’t want to do my homework.

@hallie-jean Of course! These past days I added nearly 8k words to my WIP, so I’m super happy about that…

@gracie-j Whoa, thank you so much! I love them!! Thanks for your hard work!

@seekjustice

Although I have yet to read Howl’s Moving Castle, it’s been on my “to read” list quite sometime now.

Whoa, your hook is really intriguing. It really makes me curious and want to continue reading on.

@joy-caroline

If the first couple lines of your story are the weakest, then you must have an incredibly strong story! They both make…[Read more]

@gracie-j Thank you! Whoa, I love your descriptions!

@nova21 Wow, those are great!

@joy-caroline Okay, see you then! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 Beautiful!

@e-k-seaver Ooh, nice! The first one is quite funny, to me, at least. The second one…wings? I want to know more about the wings! And I remember reading the last one on your blog!

@joy-caroline

Okay! See you Tuesday! Have a lovely break!

@joy-caroline Have a nice break!

@writerlexi1216
Thank you so much for sharing! That was great! I love how you set everything up.

@joy-caroline Oo, nice hooks!

@abigail-m Oo, Nice! I like how you set up the MC and the setting right off the bat! Thanks, by the way!

@kathleenramm Thank you! Your comments make me very happy (❁´◡`❁)

@seekjustice Thank you! That’s exactly what I wanted to set up with the prologue. I love yours as well! I really want to know what’s going to happen!

Sorry @devastate-lasting mispelt your name in my tag!

@kathleenramm

I love this topic already! @devestate-lasting @abigail-m yours sound amazing! I love the line “She couldn’t remember the last time she saw daylight” because its so eerie and confusing and immediately makes me think “What the heck?” but also makes me think of the arctic/antarctic (which I think is what you’re going for) so it grounds…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Those are a beautiful couple first lines! Something about your pros is always so lovely. It for some reason reminds me of kaleidoscopic water color painting with a touch of magic. I love it. XD

@abigail-m

I really love the imagery those first sentences. It already paints a clear picture of the scene in your head.

The bells clanged at the railroad crossing, lights flashing as the train brushed by, the wind scattering flower petals everywhere.

“Ah…”

He stood there, watching. Watching, waiting…

@kathleenramm Oo, I love that! That sounds really interesting, I’d love to read your story someday!

Ahem. Anyways, the above was from my current novella…[Read more]