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@gracie-j Whoa, thank you so much! I love them!! Thanks for your hard work!

@seekjustice

Although I have yet to read Howl’s Moving Castle, it’s been on my “to read” list quite sometime now.

Whoa, your hook is really intriguing. It really makes me curious and want to continue reading on.

@joy-caroline

If the first couple lines of your story are the weakest, then you must have an incredibly strong story! They both make…[Read more]

@gracie-j Thank you! Whoa, I love your descriptions!

@nova21 Wow, those are great!

@joy-caroline Okay, see you then! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 Beautiful!

@e-k-seaver Ooh, nice! The first one is quite funny, to me, at least. The second one…wings? I want to know more about the wings! And I remember reading the last one on your blog!

@joy-caroline

Okay! See you Tuesday! Have a lovely break!

@joy-caroline Have a nice break!

@writerlexi1216
Thank you so much for sharing! That was great! I love how you set everything up.

@joy-caroline Oo, nice hooks!

@abigail-m Oo, Nice! I like how you set up the MC and the setting right off the bat! Thanks, by the way!

@kathleenramm Thank you! Your comments make me very happy (❁´◡`❁)

@seekjustice Thank you! That’s exactly what I wanted to set up with the prologue. I love yours as well! I really want to know what’s going to happen!

Sorry @devastate-lasting mispelt your name in my tag!

@kathleenramm

I love this topic already! @devestate-lasting @abigail-m yours sound amazing! I love the line “She couldn’t remember the last time she saw daylight” because its so eerie and confusing and immediately makes me think “What the heck?” but also makes me think of the arctic/antarctic (which I think is what you’re going for) so it grounds…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Those are a beautiful couple first lines! Something about your pros is always so lovely. It for some reason reminds me of kaleidoscopic water color painting with a touch of magic. I love it. XD

@abigail-m

I really love the imagery those first sentences. It already paints a clear picture of the scene in your head.

The bells clanged at the railroad crossing, lights flashing as the train brushed by, the wind scattering flower petals everywhere.

“Ah…”

He stood there, watching. Watching, waiting…

@kathleenramm Oo, I love that! That sounds really interesting, I’d love to read your story someday!

Ahem. Anyways, the above was from my current novella…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I write the complete opposite of high fantasy, so I can’t really give you any pointers on it…but since you’ve just finished your first draft, and it’s your work, I’d say go for it, girl! And even if it doesn’t work out, you can always write another series if you want to!

(Wait, you guys edit after finishing each book? I wait til…[Read more]

@hobbitchild

Yep, that’s a completely believable scenario. I once went abseiling (like rock climbing but opposite) and I actually did fall off the cliff. Thankfully though, harnesses exist so no harm was done and I just had to climb back up again, but if I’d been in the position where I didn’t have a harness for whatever reason, I would have been…[Read more]

@imwritehere1920 Here, I’ll liven it up for you… (I just got to their profiles cuz I really can’t remember…)

@gracie-j @issawriter7 @scripter-of-kingdoms @nova21 @jenwriter17