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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
It’s fine. Alpha often does the same thing.
XD that could potentially get funny. His mind is already scrambled right now (that’s why the mood changes. The reason he seems like a different person sometimes is different parts of his mind are all trying to take control. It’s complicated) so why not just add some girl into…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay, I want to know if anybody on here does not like Treasure Planet and WHY YOU DON’T.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I think Alpha has insulted everyone in this culture by now, from his opinions on dancing to his disgust in their non-warrior mindset to his dislike of pepperoni pizza.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Alpha
“I already loosened up a few minutes ago, and I acted like a fool!” Alpha slid his knife into its sheath with a slap, and checked the accessories on his wrists. “I get my ‘fun’ from combat. I don’t think I need some worthless dance. Besides, I’ve seen this culture’s idea of dancing. It’s more boring than when nothing goes wrong…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I just realized their FOUR WEEKS OLD not two weeks! How could they grow up so fast on me 😭😭 💗
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@loopylin @theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @linus-smallprint @highscribeofaetheruim @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c
If you didn’t know, my cat named Marbles had a litter of four little treasures around two weeks ago. This is the Canva link to some pics of the little things!
Many thanks to Shadow, Loopy, Highscribe, Linus, and the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Fel, try sandals. They stay on your feet unlike flip-flops and don’t squeeze your feet like sneakers. I recommend them, just find some that fit your feet correctly and you’ll find a world of comfort!
And that scene was great! You should share stuff more often.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@keilah-h @anyone else
Tenz scene!Â
Tenz stared out over the large of water, his eyes wide and mouth agape.
“What is this?”
Misty laughed. “It’s a lake silly.”
“Oh.” Tenz stared in wonder before walking forward as if expecting to walk over the water. When his foot didn’t step on top of water, he drew back in surprise. “It’s not solid!”
“Of…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Me: Awww, Riker the poor boi
Also me: Will you just realize that God wants you as his child no matter what already?!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Naga families can get up to two hundred children. So far, Leith has 52 siblings and who-knows how many in-laws! I haven’t named all of Alpha’s children yet, and therefore haven’t decided how many are married.
Silvanis is actually Leith’s older brother, being Alpha’s first child.
And Alpha was adopted by Nahim. And Alpha was created to…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
I was shaking with excitement when I saw your reply.
Just one note, I actually made Mandin purposefully a really likeable character because I knew not everyone would like Nahim. Your reply has told me I actually mostly achieved this effect.
The strongest Nahim trait here is depression. Solid, unwavering depression. XD He thinks…
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Ruth replied to the topic Full Novella(!): Oathbroken in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
:Jonas
I’m jealous.
That was a great story, I will definitely read it again.
I totally concur with Sara
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Are you all ready for the life of Tenz as far as I have it?
This is kinda a sad story, just so you know.
Tenz was actually originally the name given to the clone who was to be Alpha’s second-in-command and replacement commander in case Alpha was ever killed. He had about 5-10% more Grathmere DNA than the other Assassin clones, but way less…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Man, I almost forgot I even made this thread… Also, I went back and edited to a point all of what I had written so far, so some sections are outdated now. This is the link to my Google Docs that’s been updated.Â
DO NOT feel obligated to read the newer version, especially since it’ll be outdated again by the time I go through to…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Note: Evelyn Blume has water elemental powers
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Ruth replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
High fantasy.
Though, is it possible to put a half a vote in for urban fantasy? Cuz, I kinda like that concept.
ngl i feel really stupid right now for being a writer…a FANTASY writer mind you, and NOT KNOWING WHAT THESE ARE….oh well, a day of cleaning out chicken coops and shoveling ground corn and trying to rea…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Alpha
“No, I don’t have a girlfriend. I might check on Narray, but she won’t want me there.” Alpha’s voice and face was devoid of emotion. “I only asked because this culture seems to care about it a lot. It’s not even a festival from what I can figure out.” Alpha reached out his hand and pulled the knife from the wall using the black…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
That’s mostly a mistake on my part. In rp’s I tend to reveal things much faster than in a book. In Alpha’s actual story, Nar doesn’t know his plans until Emmie convinces him there’s another way when Alpha is more like thirty than twentie. I also kinda did this on purpose, since I’ve had little expierance with Alpha in this stage, so…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
It was actually really good for Alpha that he vented his emotions for a little bit. He doesn’t know it yet, but by shutting had s emotions in, he’s actually making it harder for him to control his power. Not to mention it doesn’t help his mental health.
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