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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
I guess its turned more into a blurb but whatever
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
There’s the new one!! SO! Same thing, 3 things ya like and 3 questions u have!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @Madelyn @faith-
After saving their own kingdom, Ara, and her friend, November find themselves unable to return home. Their only hope to ever be reunited with their families is to defeat the Dark One who threatens them. But where to start?
Traveling a world they’ve never known, the two find themselves trapped in Cirque; a city o…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Also if anyone else I tagged or if y’all wanna tag anyone who would like to comment on my LATER revision plz do so! But if u wouldn’t mind, plz wait to comment until my next updated pitch is out
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@madelyn @faith-q @elishavet-pidyon these are so great thank you!! I’m going to do the first rewrite pitch maybe tomorrow and post it here to do this again (hopefully y’all don’t mind me doing this a couple times. Y’all don’t have to share ur questions and stuff 😂 they may not change)
also some questions I will answer myself and not thru the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
These are all really neat!! They seem to differ a lot but at the same time overlap with each other if that makes any sense lol!! But that’s Creatives for you XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Yes, they’re wolves. It’s still in first draft form, but… I like it. =) Thanks!
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Koshka replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
I think it ate my thingy. Maybe I made it long. I shall try again.
Its a full scene, not a line, but anyway…
Flickers of light glinted back, caught on gossamers in the murky darkness. Holding the torch as high as the cavern roof allowed, Meyani crept down stairs, counting each crumbling step. Two-and-ten, three-and-ten, four-and-ten…
A heap o…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Well, I have been working on this scene for some time now, mulling it over it in my mind, so I finally wrote it down, even though I haven’t gotten near this part of my book yet. Its not exactly a line- a whole scene to be exact. But anyway…
Flickers of light glinted back, caught on gossamers in the murky darkness. Holding the torch as high as…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@lydia-s Nice, nice! I’m quite in love with Steinbeck and Dostoyvesky, throw in some Ray Bradbury and Dickens here and there, and there are so many more titles I’ve been meaning to read. Your literature program sounds fun! I’ve been meaning to take one at some point, haha.
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Koshka replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 6 months ago
Classical. I grew up on it, so the older vocabularies don’t bother me. The depths in story, the mixture of poetry in prose, all the types and shadows… I feel more at home with classics than modern literature.
But I haven’t read much truly old stuff beyond Pilgrim’s Progress, some Shakespeare, and Canterbury Tales (which I do not…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @seekerofthetruth @kathleenramm @jenwriter17 @nanisnook @elfwing @seekjustice @sparrowhawke @maryg3 @relia @writerlexi1216 @nova21 @hallie-…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
SOOO I know im making a lot of posts but OH WELL XD
Anyway I’m gonna try out this cool writing tip I learned about writing ur pitch and a LONG synopsis of ur entire book before drafting and then editing that FIRST before ever drafting, but that being said I need ppl to help with the pitch! The point of it is, you go back and edit the pitch a few…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Welp, I love revising. Writing itself is difficult and obnoxious.
Let me rephrase that; I enjoy writing, but I struggle turning off the strong-minded inner editor who then destroys all my work because it’s in first draft stage and therefore terrible. However, as rewriting is my favorite part of writing in general I usually don’t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon lol!! That is understandable!!! Drafting (writing in GENERAL) is ROUGH!!!
@devastate-lasting Oh nice!! I’ve tried doing the chapter outline thing for drafts and maybe once I get to later drafts it’ll work better for me 😂
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Lin replied to the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Usually I write a beginning, and then I start working on an outline/plot/characters, and usually after I have the outline for all the chapters done, or most of them, enough to keep me busy for a while, I just starting writing each chapter one by one.
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
HELLO MY KEEEEEPERS!!! SO! I am currently drafting Project Garden as you know, and I have discovered that I am seriously Pantsing it. Like…legit. I’ve got ideas and obviously some plot and storyline but it’s just like…writing whatever comes which is honestly hard most of the time and easy sometimes. SO WEIRD!
ANYWAY!! I’m wondering how…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 6 months ago
@kathleenramm These days I can consume nothing but classic lit. I think when I was younger I found it boring but now I find modern lit lacking in depth and character and theme. Still, I prefer literature from the 1800’s and 1900’s, and maybe occasionally the 1700’s. Anything earlier I find, well, hard to read.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic What's Your Favorite Relationship Type in Fiction? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h awww so like Phineas and Isabella!! PHINABELLA FOREVA!!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 6 months ago
Thank you!!!! They’re doing such an awesome job of it, I might actually try to watch some when it comes out!
And that probably sounded strange. Explanation; being someone blessed with an extremely vivid imagination I find myself disappointed by movie adaptations of books I perhaps only skim read.
But this looks good, so I…[Read more]
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