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EmilySF replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you so much for the advice! I might try that for different cultures/nations in one world! (I have three major ones, atm.) I have (*counts*) five different languages, besides the universal one (I think) and a similar amount of writing systems (based on the same basic runes, just different styles) and those come together with the…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe
Corvina drew a breath, eyeing Zoe like she had done something wrong.
“Look,” she said, her voice soft like when Malcolm coaxed her before demanding something from her. “I’m not ‘ordering’ you to do anything. I’m just…letting you tag along, okay? That’s it.” Corvina spoke cooly, almost slyly, like there was a hidden trick.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Nevermind, it’s gone.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oops! That was only part, do you want me to go ahead and add the rest?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
His brother’s face looked to be stone, the expression which meant he wasn’t comfortable, although he had returned his blade to it’s scabbard.
Vulkasin laughed. He couldn’t help it really. Not with Zlatan acting a complete Desanik beside him (Military officer similar to a sergeant). At first he tried to…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you!! ☺️ It is probably the scene I’ve written that I’m most proud of, right now, because it feels so natural when I’m reading it and it came so easily. (I had another scene, long ago, but ALAS I lost it to accursed technology (which I’m still bitter about because there was a ton more I lost with it).) It seems like near…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
I have given some thought to that idea, but as of yet, I do not know how Anti will be affected, mentally or anything. Aside from being ostracized completely from his group of gifted and all society, I am not sure how he will respond. I think he will continue to rationalize his actions, at least for a while, but when it comes time for…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka ur fine! And I agree!!
Arabella and November
Ara gasped in delight at the sight of the familiar figure. Her face was glowing, despite the darkness all around, and her bright smile lit up the room.
”Jocelyn!” November cried. Before another word could be spoken, Jocelyn leapt from her spot, Nyx following suit, his paws reaching out…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
They stared at him each in a different version of confusion.
He must not have explained something. “Which passage do you think-”
A door a little farther down one corridor flew open with a bang and a bright flash shot out, landing before them. “I have arrived!” A cheery voice announced.
There stood a girl, her smile…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka u wanna make a reply?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka I wouldn’t mind if they Jocelyn. They can also meet Sofia too. Jocelyn’s kinda by herself now sooo 😂
Jocelyn
Nyx was sleeping soundly, curled around her neck and tucked away in her hair. She smiled, listening to his soft, sweet purrs.
Her steps were slow and steady, as she didn’t want to jostle him, and she knew t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Yes! XD I think they figured that out pretty quick.
This next one would probably be a good place for them to meet up with someone, whether Sofia or Lyn and Nyx.
Vulkasin and Zlatan
November stared at the strip in his hands with something approaching horror.
Zlatan didn’t notice.
Vulkasin desperately tried not to laugh,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka also whenever they meet Jocelyn and Nyx I feel like Vulkasin is gonna get along GREAT with them and Zlatan’s just gonna be like
Oh my land….what….?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I srsly love these brothers. And their relationship with each other is great. I also love Vulkasin’s kinda teasing nature. I think he’d kinda be funny with November especially cuz both of them can already probably sense November has an OBVIOUS crush on Ara
meanwhile Ara’s oblivious….always oblivious Ara…. 🤦…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka XD 😂
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EmilySF replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 and THAT is another reason why I must have my MC die: so I can use this scene. (But I was already planning on having him die, anyway, because that was the beginning idea of this WIP: to write a story from a mentor’s pov and still have him die.) ANYWAY… Thank you!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That’s such a perfect description of Vulkasin! (And their marching rations, hahaha)
Now for my part…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf OH MY GOSH THAT IS STINKING AMAZING!!!!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
November
For a second….November was positive Vulkasin was going to suggest them actually eat horse. He blanched.
Thankfully, Zlatan had interrupted him.
“The buteries vill be either on ze lowest level of zees ‘ouse, or in a separate building.” He said. November frowned and glanced at Ara.
Buteries?
Ara mouthed a single word- Fo…[Read more]
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