Denali Christianson

@koshka @emilysf

Jocelyn & Nyx

Vulkasin wasn’t the only impatient one.

”Been ready!” Lyn said. Zlatan winced at her boisterous exclamation. Nyx’s nose twitched in anticipation and he leapt to the floor, his tails and ears twitching excitedly.

“Let’s get this going already! I’m ready to eat!”

November nodded his agreement to the little fox.…[Read more]

ROFL XD @koshka

AGH! I accidentally used my tag instead of- @godlyfantasy12

Why?!?

@koshka @emilysf

Zlatan

“Can you open the door?” Sofia’s voice was pale.

Zlatan drew his hand down the doorpost untill he found the bar. It lifted with surprising ease, and the stairwell was flooded by a soft glow.

He stumbled through, nearly blind in the moonlight. Moonlight?

The others had followed, or rather surged, out into the corridor.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf

I can.

@godlyfantasy12

Oh! I just reread your question. Perhaps they should meet up here, but they could also find the door left open/slashed and think “That’s funny. We should be on guard.”

@koshka @keilah-h @emilysf @e-m-trepke

Ok, we’ll have them all meet after the kitchens ok. Maybe later. For now they can hang with Hesh 😂

Koshka u wanna make the next scene? I made the last one. Or Emily?

@godlyfantasy12

I’m not sure how sci-fi will work with my 10th century charies. If they do meet I think it should be after the kitchens.

But I’ll roll with whatever.

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke also when y’all RP would y’all mind putting ur Viewpoint characters name like this?

Rinzler

Or

Hesh

so we know who it is thinking aloud and feeling the emotions, kinda like if u have multiple POVs in a book sometimes the author lets u know who it is speaking. (And that way we know ur RPing and not just commenting) 😊

@koshka hey! So kind of a plug, but my recent blog post might help.

https://www.authorvlsmith.com/blog/the-truth-about-writing-why-is-it-so-hard

@everyone I mean idk Rinzler that well but he kinda seems like the type where, even if he finds the group he’d set off by himself 🤣

@koshka @emilysf

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke

hey Koshka, Emilysf do y’all wanna have our charries meat rinzlee and them thru this door? Then they will have found the exit (cuz Rinzler and them are outside near the guardhouse I believe but maybe not…lol)

Or will that get too confusing having so many charries around???

@keilah-h Yes!! I recently read all the KOTLC books that are out and I’m Obsessed with Keefe!! And I realized he had so many similarities with November!!

Also, the name November actually came from just googling names lol. I found the name November and loved it!!

BUT, as my series has expanded and connected more with age (as it does in w…[Read more]

@faith-q

For your YA fantasy:

I think there might be more potential for more mature themes with Jarek being 15, because he won’t be purely emotional, but can still have those sort of responses; any deeper thoughts he has and more mature, developed reactions to things will be both believable and more powerful. You won’t be held back by a more…[Read more]

@koshka @emilysf

Arabella

If his hands were free, she was sure November would’ve nearly ripped his scalp to pieces at this point.

There was no light. Only pitch black nothingness. Enough to get lost in. Enough to drown out anything and everything. The only thing keeping her steady, keeping sane was the warm hands she held.

She knew, before e…[Read more]

@madelyn

Uh, I’m not entirely sure, but I’ll give you an outline of what I’ve done.

I’m supposing you already have your character/s discovered for the most part, so-

I read To Save a Cat Writes a Novel.

And warped that advice to fit my own needs.

But what exactly did I do?

Well…

WARNING: THIS MAY BE UNINTELLIGIBLE AND HORRIBLE ADVICE.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Sofia

The group was talking about the building in terms she didn’t understand. She couldn’t describe quite like what the building was, to herself. It was like the Kaula, but the stones were rough and not smoothed for the walls. And there seemed to be no order to the halls, and too many rooms of various…[Read more]

@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

I shall keep it then! =)

Ooooooooo…I like that scene.

You asked for a long one?

Zlatan

“Down means we’re closer to the exit, right?” There was a faint desperate gleam in Novembré’s eyes.

A very different gleam shone in his brother’s. “Ah, let’s hope so. Of course, it could mean Ve-”

“It should.”…[Read more]

@koshka

Hi! We have and haven’t yep! 🙂 It’s nice to meet you! I’m Clare, but you probably already knew that. 😉 That’s not weird at all, honestly. And I’m not surprised because there were only three pages, heh. I’d do the sam if there were that few. ;D

Interesting! Yeah, I wouldn’t exactly call my interest in LotR and Middle Earth obsession,…[Read more]