Denali Christianson

@koshka who do u want ur charries to meet? Ik Luna lol! Maybe Luna and Nyx??

@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w

Ma poor Paxton….

Paxton

Paxton scrubbed at his eyes, hastily stumbling down the hall, making sure to keep close to the wall.

He glanced over his shoulder, wondering if Aramis would follow soon after.

Thankfully, no one came.

He let out a small, shaky breath of relief, hands f…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon ahhhhh I love them soooo much….

Btw just wanted to mention this…

But in this AU…Paxton has a fear of large birds…idk if it’s quite on the phobia scale and it’s mostly large birds like Eagles, hawks, etc, tho it could probably be medium sized too like crows and such.

This is due to some trauma that you’re just gonna have to wait and find out about when he starts getting int…[Read more]

@koshka AHHH I LOVE THAT!!

and Luna’s just gonna be like BLAH BLAH BLAH *and talk his ear off XD*

she grew up in an all adult commune with like no kids or teens to talk to so yea.

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilder-w @keilah-h @freedomwriter76

Soren

“You messed up, Edrich.”

Aramis mocked a gasp, placing a hand over his chest. “He speaks!” He raised his hands, gesturing at Soren. “Oh great one, please deliver your knowledge and wisdom to us!” At the end of his sentence, he rolled his eyes, plopping himself back onto the be…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Go ahead!

@godlyfantasy12

I just had this scene pop into my head where Luna and Inglor meet!

“Well, hello, little sister.” Blinks at her purple hair and eyes with a slightly bewildered ‘where are you from?’ expression.

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, November…*groan* no one better touch him again! I have an elf and a half-elf in my ranks.

(Yes Aramis, that was a threat)

@wilder-w @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?

@koshka UUUGHHH I LOVE THEM!!! I am a SUCKER FOR ELVESSSS and u write them so beautifully…..

November

November shifted with his sling, frowning as he tried to maneuver the strap behind his neck with one hand.

Man, was this thing itchy….

And so was his arm…

Nope. Don’t think about it…otherwise it’s going to bother you all day!…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

So everyone else has said everything already lol!! Mainly about Christopher’s disrespect a bit, maybe show that he actually doesn’t see her that way, but her misbelief has everything she’s seeing skewed (because that’s usually how it goes)

In truth it could be he knows exactly how strong she is…but he’s not strong enough t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w

Y’all’s character is are so…so…AHH!! You have to save them, the poor, dear, charies!

Anyway…

Almarrin

Whispers all this morning were stirring the quiet anger inside him.

“From the second story…”

“…heard he just tripped…”

Almarrin slung his backpack over his shoulder,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 hey! Did u ever finish that scene with the Boys? 🥺😣 what happens to them?!

@freedomwriter76 awesome job! BUT UGH EZRAAAA 😭

@wilder-w

Arabella

“Oh! Hello, Hope…” Ara smiled, though she was sure it didn’t meet her eyes. She unclenched her fists. “Sorry…just…a bit tense. Everything’s a bit hectic right now.”

Hope nodded, “Yea…I-I’m sure…”

Ara folded her hands, “I suppose we never got formerly introduced, but…well, we already know each other’s names,” Ara laughed lig…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon AHHH ALWIN YOU ARE BREAKING MY HEART!!!

GASP!!

I just had a thought…

I want Alwin to meet Paxton….

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

Jocelyn

As soon as Cécile had spoken, Jocelyn knew the words rang true.

No wonder Dawson became so tense…

Jocelyn’s fists clenched. Hurting someone just because you could…just because they were under your command…

It was…just so wrong.

Like so many other things she’d seen…

 …[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Everyone else basically said exactly what I was going to, so here’s a condensed form of my two cents:

I would make it about Briana, not girls. So say something like “Why am I not taking a watch?”, just to remove the focus at the beginning. I would also revise the part about being pretty. Maybe put inphasis on ‘I’m your king,’…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Cécile 

The moment these two had appeared the rest of the group went nearly rigid. As soon as the man had started speaking, she almost had to hold Annia back. The girl’s hands were held at her waist in tight fists, showing her calloused knuckles.

“Annia, no.” Cécile whispered in her ear. “Breaking his nose wo…[Read more]