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@Jenwriter17 All the best for writing and editing, friend! <3

I’m afraid I don’t have the time to beta read at the moment, but I hope you can find a heap of other people to help you. 🙂

@seekjustice  @rochellaine  @other-aussies-and/or-nightowls

I’m here. Seeing if I can work in a bit of writing 🙂

@warrenluther04 I am lovin’ all the kapeefer literature you and Dekreel are writing! 😀 Great job! 😉

@seekjustice Yay, chapter swapping! Sounds great, thank you! 😀

Yes, that makes sense. I think I’m going to rewrite the first chapter, keeping everyone’s notes in mind. Jane said I was telling instead of showing a lot, so I’m going to try to work on that (maybe I should finish Daeus’ Show Don’t Tell course, hehe 🙂 ). So I’ll definitely let you…[Read more]

@skredder  Just the kind of ending I wanted. XD Thanks!

@ariel-ashira  Thank you! This is a Kingdom Pen adventure I’ve been working on. Sort of like Warren’s Dog series. You can read my whole story here. Just scroll down first. XD

Oh, never mind, you have read it all! XD Thank you so much!! I’m glad you like it! And yes, you can’t go wrong w…[Read more]

@warrenluther04  Well done!! It seems you have made good use of my map 😉

I LOVE FLYING SQUIRRELS!!!!!!

@ariel-ashira  YES I’M AN ENFJ TOO! *high-five*

And I shall tag more ENFJ’s: @dragon-snapper  @daeus  @sam-kowal

@dekreel this is totally awesome-sauce! I can’t wait until the next paaaaaaart! 😀

@warrenluther04 @jane-maree @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @anyone I forgot

Thank you all so very much for reading the first chapter of my WIP! I admit, I was really nervous about other people reading it, but you all were so honest and I will keep all of your advice in mind.

Considering how much I needed to work on with my first chapter, I…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 yeah, I’d love it if you would! 🙂 warning though; this is a really rough first draft

@Dekreel awwww I recognised that direct quote. *blushes*

This was the best, Dekreel. xD

@jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

oops got your tag wrong filewriterbase13x , just look at the post above

@filewriter13x okie dokie! I’ll try to draw him tonight and hopefully post him by morning! 👍🏼

@jane-maree you’re welcome, ’twas my pleasure 😉

@Jenwriter17 okay so I don’t want to go into full editor mode and scare you (been there, done that, it was bad xD) so what exactly are you looking for critique on? The general overall chapter? Or some more details like showing vs telling, etc.?

Oops X’D  That was an epic tag failure.

@supermonkey42  KPA!! XD

The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story

Part Ten: Encouragement. In Many Ways.

And so, Jenna, Dekreel, Catwing, Skredder, Valentine, Rochellaine, Jane Maree and the troll-thing hid GIFs for the grand Easter-GIF hunt together. In the meantime, they talked laughed, bickered, argued, joked, and ate.

It didn’t take long at all for Jenna to warm up to her n…[Read more]

@Jenwriter17 thank you so so much for organising this and it was a heap of fun to do it. *throws confetti* Thanks again. 😀

@daughteroftheking thanks! 😊 I do a first sketch in pencil, line it in .3 and .1 Micron waterproof liners, then colour in watercolour. I did the white detail with a Sakura Gelly Roll white pen. Thanks so much for the drawing prompt!!!